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Inara's song

Monday, July 24, 2006

Just Inara's musings on how she feels, and if Mal will ever admit it ...

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A touch of silk across my wrist

If you but asked I would resist

Remove the light above my door

The light that makes you call me ‘whore’

The men who pass beneath that frame

I do not know, and cannot name

But if you spoke with tender voice

And showed me love, gave me the choice

I’d rend the hangings from the walls

Turn off the light, ignore the calls

For you, my thief that plies the black,

Have stole my heart – don’t give it back

Comments
Monday, 24 July 2006 10:52
What can i say i like it.
SMOKYDAYS
Monday, 24 July 2006 14:17
very nice, i like it!
Tuesday, 25 July 2006 00:10
Oh...now this is good;)

BEB
Thursday, 27 July 2006 02:02
Wow. Now this I can picture her saying! You've got her perfectly in character and the rhythmn for this piece is amazing!

Keep it up!
Thursday, 27 July 2006 02:33
wow. shiny
Sunday, 30 July 2006 08:57
Im not a big fn of rhyme but thats an awesome poem!
Sunday, 18 February 2007 11:35
=D so imagine inara thinkin this n there's a really nice rhythm too. shiny!
Tuesday, 25 March 2008 15:08
That's really great. I mean... really! It really expresses Inara's emotion. I like it. =]
Tuesday, 10 June 2008 13:50
This is super shiny. I like it lots.
Saturday, 02 July 2011 14:48
I totally agree. Shiny!
Monday, 12 December 2011 18:31
As several others already said: I Like it.
And so do I.

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