Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Brace Yourself

Tuesday, July 4, 2006

Not all dreams make sense on the surface. Mal is having one of them...Inspired by 'I Slept With Someone In Fall Out Boy and All I Got Was This Stupid Song Written About Me' by Fall Out Boy.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2806    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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He could smell her. Inara. That scent could drive him mad...

Mal felt his eyes flutter open. He was expecting to see the curved ceiling of his bunk, but instead saw stone. Concrete to be exact.

“Sir,” shouted Zoe in the distance, “Wake up! We got Alliance bombing!”

Mal shot up and looked in his lap. His rifle from the war was laid against his old uniform. “Gou shi...” He propped himself up and looked over the put together fort. Soldiers were running about, ducking for cover. Low whistles of bombs could be heard in the distance and were growing louder. Zoe was running as fast as she could but tripped over concrete and fell. Not taking any risks, she crawled towards the nearest makeshift shelter, shouting, “I’ll get back to you later, sir!”

“Just protect yourself, Zoe,” he shouted back. He got ready to crawl further into the makeshift fort when he saw it. A flash of red. That scent. He looked back up and there she was. Inara. Standing as poised as ever, looking at the sky. She turned to Mal, tears in her eyes. Mal felt his heart speed up. He knew in his head that it would be dangerous to jump out and grab her, but his head wasn’t ruling his body right now.

Mal climbed over the wall, gun in hand and ran to Inara. He reached out for her hand. “C’mon, we have to get to safety!”

“Find a safe place and brace ourselves,” she muttered as she looked to the sky again. She looked at Mal’s hand and ran her fingers across it before grabbing it and practically digging her nails into his skin. Mal ignored the pain as he pulled her back towards the fort and pulled her down in there. He pulled his rifle close to him as Inara curled into a little ball. “Some secrets weren't meant to be told...”

Mal groaned as he pushed aside his rifle and moved himself in front of Inara. “Well, you picked a good time to start actin’ like the girl.”

Inara’s eyes flashed as she looked at Mal. “What is wrong with you?”

“Me?! You were the one standing in the middle of a gorram war zone!”

Inara kept on talking thou

Comments
Tuesday, 04 July 2006 10:17
This was very shiny and so in character that as Mal comes out of the dream it is River who screams. Yep, what's the betting they had the same one. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
DEEPGIRL187
Tuesday, 04 July 2006 18:53
I bow before thy greatness. Really, that was excellent. You weaved the lyrics into the story seamlessly. Keep up the good work!
Thursday, 06 July 2006 06:45
Uh....stupid question: is Inara acting like River in the dream supposed to be River somehow meddling with Mal's braing unintentionally? Cuz it was weird...great, but weird;)

Still...really wanna see where this could go from here:D

BEB
Sunday, 30 July 2006 10:14
Oh, this one is a lovely read. Such a great dream setting and exactly the right mix of confusion and dream-logic.

I couldn't say I know 100% what's going on, but I'd have to say it was River somehow burrowing into Mal's dream and trying to explain Inara to him.

My favorite line:
"I've always weighed what I've lost against what I left..."

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