Disclaimer: I don't own anyone in the story – they all belong to Joss and Mutant Enemy.
Author notes: This is the third story in what has become the arc following Advice in Space. The second was Screams in the night. You probably don’t need to read those to understand this one, but would probably help and they are both short vignettes. Set after Objects In Space, but will probably be rendered completely AU by the BDM in a year or so. This story just keeps pestering me even though I've been telling Mal that I'm too busy with RL to play, but he can't seem to keep River under control. Not beta-ed mostly because all the characters insist they are acting just fine and don't need to be altered any at all. If there are any typos, I apologize.
Those Left Behind
Chapter 1: Possibilities
Chinese glossary
Yuchun – stupid/idiot
Diyu – hell
We de ma – mother of god
Kaylee yawned as she entered the engine room. Wash had woken her with the information that it was okay to shut the engines down. The mechanic had been harassing the pilot and Captain to find a time to cruise without the engines so she could do some much needed maintenance work. After threatening to keep them on planet for an entire week, Mal had finally relented and decided that the money he would save in down time and fuel would equal any bonus the ship would get for delivering their goods early. As a result, Kaylee was now awake well before the ship's normal morning in order to get a head start on the maintenance before the first meal.
Kaylee jumped and let out a squeak when she saw someone in the dark corner beside the now quiet engine. Once her heart left her stomach, she could clearly see River's pale skin under the girl's long hair. "River, you scared me. What are you doing awake so early?"
"Sometimes the engine is louder," River told her.
Kaylee raised an eyebrow. The other girl made the statement as if her meaning
But I think the best part of this one is...it is really starting to feel like a series here, which gives me hope for more!! :-)
jebbypal
An yes, I just re-read this one, it's that d*mn good!
Tried reviewing over at FF.net. Damn place was too fickle, wouldn't let me. Any way, I liked your portrayal of Kaylee, guess practice makes perfect? Or better? *grin* The River breakdown was well done. Glad Mal can't keep River under control...I liked the pieces, seeing them tie in together. Another fave part, was Mal dreading have the crew pitch a mutiny. I can so picture that! *LoL* I absolutely loved the Screams in the Night. Great characterizon on River. Although it's hard to choose between Advice. Love my Mal...*grin* Can't wait for the next chapter. And I hope the crew decides to let yosaffbride's muse out of the crate sometime soon.
Cassie E
You can't take the sky from me
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