Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Delta Rain - Torrents chapter 2

Friday, April 23, 2004

Things go from bad to worse. Don't they always?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3957    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Characters do not belong to me; they are the property of Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy and Fox.

Feedback is always welcome.

Takes place shortly after the series ended and about a month after the events in Delta Rain. Beware, Tori's evil plot bunnies are infiltrating at alarming rates! I took some liberties on how the Blue Hands rods work in this chapter, hope it's not to jarring...I am working with the assumption that they have different settings, one for when they want to clear a whole room and one for when they have a specific target in mind. The other seeming inconsistency becomes a little clearer later, I hope.

Thank you Miss Evil Giggly Laugh (aka Cassie E) for the beta.

Chinese translations: Go se: Crap; Ai ya: Damn; Hwoon dahn: Son of a bitch; Chusheng xai-jiao de xiang huo: animal fucking bastard

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"My apologies, Captain," he said, his voice utterly void of human emotion. "It appears Mr. Wing has had to bow out of your negotiations."

River watched as a second figure moved into view behind the other. She felt the fear threatening to overwhelm her as she pulled Jayne's blanket tighter around her, his warm scent enveloping her like a shield. Dimly aware that everyone but Mal and herself had stepped back out of view. She wished she could escape those piercing eyes so easily. They pecked at her flesh, stripping, peeling, rending...

"Two by two, hands of blue...two by two, hands of blue..."

"I see Ms. Tam is still with you." A ghost of a smile settled on his lips, "Perhaps we can help each other out. We have no interest in you or your crew Captain, just in the safe return of Ms. Tam."

She felt the Captain's gaze on her; his irritation that she had not stayed out of sight. All sharp little pin pricks jabbing into her; not like Jayne's irritation, which was more like sandpaper rubbing against her. Her soul cried out for him, but he did not answer

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 April 2004 14:42
again with the incredible writing Neroli. felt like crying myself at the end. thank you for continuing to share your gift!
Friday, 23 April 2004 17:02
Love this, and I really like the bond between Jayne and River and how it factors into this story. Also you write River and Mal beautifully perfectly picking up on the way they connect and seem to understand each other on a non-verbal as well as verbal level. Those hands of blue are some piece of work, can't wait to see what happens next! Great job, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 April 2004 17:04
Can't wait until the next chapter.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 24 April 2004 00:04
This is shiny. The story is great and your characterizations are bang-on. I can hardly wait for the next installment.
Saturday, 24 April 2004 11:08
Neroli, you have my full attention an I can't wait to read the next installment. This is excellent
Sunday, 02 May 2004 05:44
There aren't enough words to tell you how much I love this. If I tried I would only end up babbling. So suffice it to say that this is a lovely story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 02 May 2004 19:08
Crap, somehow I completely missed this one! Stupid work:P Great job, I really love your Jayne parts.

One note, there were a couple of places that you used "to" that it should have been "too" instead.

jebbypal
JAZMYN
Friday, 18 March 2005 09:03
damn i love it i love the "pink tiny pink monleys climbing up him like a mountain" i love that its so cute cant wait till next chaper
jazz
Saturday, 27 August 2005 22:10
jayne and river babies!!! yay!!!

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