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Goodbye

Monday, May 29, 2006

Its deperessing

CATEGORY: FILK    TIMES READ: 1982    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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I held your hand

Wstched your breath

Prayed for your blessing

Held back my tears

Felt your pulse

Heard your breath become ragged

Lost it all

When I lost you

Comments
Tuesday, 30 May 2006 03:40
This is exactly how I felt when my Hubby passed on ! Thank you for writtin something so poingent!!
Friday, 02 June 2006 02:06
Never actually been with someone when they died, but I can imagine the feelings that it would bring on.

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