Blue Sun Room FILK - FILK
Light Seduction
Wednesday, May 10, 2006
Sweatty poem for your enjoyment, thank the firefly chat for its name
CATEGORY: FILK TIMES READ: 2275 RATING: 10.0 (G) SERIES: FIREFLY
Light breeze through the curtains
Whispers around the room
Across the desk
In the closet
Over the dresser
Between the sheets
Over the sweat tinged skin
Brings shievers from the sweat
Moves overs the flesh
Goes between the souls
Mingles with the gasps
Spreads out over the room
Dries their sweat laced hair
Lingers on the lips
Disappears in excited lungs
Comments
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 10:33
Very much an airy/wind type feel to this one. I like it.
Thursday, 11 May 2006 04:22
"lingers on the lips and disappears into excited lungs."
I think this is my favorite poem yet, much less... slit your wrists
I think this is my favorite poem yet, much less... slit your wrists
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