Blue Sun Room FILK - FILK
Stars above us,
Sparkling in your eyes
Breeze through the branches,
Twisting wind in your hair
Whisper of the wild life,
The softness of your voice
Glow from the moon,
Beauty of your smile
Vines growing slowly,
Your arms wrapped around me
Movement in the leaves,
Feel of your breath
Gentle scent of the flowers,
Your perfume everywhere
Moss soft beneath our feet, us,
Your body soft against mine
First drops of rain on my cheek,
Second only to the feel of your lips on mine
Comments
Tuesday, 09 May 2006 18:51
Mmmmm I can feel the kisses with the rain, moon and stars are good imagery too.
Tuesday, 09 May 2006 20:32
nice, this reminds me of an ex boyfriend... in a good way. I like it
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 04:23
there is a typo ('out' feet) in the line forth to the end. Good job though.
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