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The Private Pt3

Monday, May 8, 2006

The continuing Adventures of the private. We finally know her name.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2109    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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After about two more weeks the doctor finally released me. I was a civillian again. I left the hospital with all I owned, uniform, coat and duffle bag. They must have matched it with my tags and stored it. I also had 3,000 Alliance Dollars to start over with, it rounded out ta 500 per week. Not bad for for layin inna bed. I caught a public transport down ta the docks. People are always needed ta work on ships as spacers. I started down the line of ships, lookin for a good one. I was gonna leave this rock for good! Then I saw her....the lady from Serenity Valley, and she had a ship! "Excuse me," I said as I came up behind her. She turned around her eyes widened with suprise. "Hi, I'm Teri and ya never did tell me your name." "Zoe" she said "and its good to see ya up and around." About then the man that was with her came down the ramp. "Come on Zoe, we've gotta find a crew." He said as he walked past me. "Sir," I began "could I sign on?" He stopped, turned around and came back. He looked me over and walked around me. "Name soldier!" He commanded "Teri Baxter, Sir!" I replied "Former Private Independant Forces." "Well what do I need you for?" he asked. "Security when you and Zoe are away from the ship." I replied "and anything else...within reason." "Why my ship?" "I remembered you and Zoe from Serenity Valley and thought ya might be able ta help a fellow BrownCoat find a job?" "You did, did you now!" He said as he got all sargent-like. "My name is Captain Malcolm Reynolds and this is my boat! My word is law on Serenity! Ya got that Baxter!" "Yes Sir!" I replied. Captain Reynolds walked around me one more time, then said "Zoe, sign her on and show her to her quarters. Catch up with me at Purple Thistle." He walked away and left me and Zoe standin there. Zoe went in and I followed, we went through the cargo bay, up some stairs and down a hall, till we came to a door. She pussed a button and it opened ta reveal a ladder goin down. "Here's your quarters, get unpacked and stand guard at the cargo bay doors." She said as

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ANONYMOUS
Monday, 08 May 2006 02:43
ahhhhhh. formatting! Please!
Monday, 08 May 2006 03:42
I like it, blaze, I hope you'll do more so I can see what happens next.
Monday, 08 May 2006 18:27
I really like this fic, despite the formatting issues :D

Will there be more soon?
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 09 May 2006 17:41
This is so you Blazie....I loved it. Keep it coming!!!!!!
Tuesday, 09 May 2006 17:43
The last comment was from me Blazie.

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