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Untold

Friday, May 5, 2006

i used this poem in my lastest piece of art andi was asked to post it by a friend so here is untold.

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Another day, another pain.

What mistakes have I made?

Can it stop?

Moving through the hall. Welcome to my hell.

I talk to much.

Too many facts.

Spots of blood everywhere.

Is it over? Did I pass?

Dark figures stop my cries.

Tears running down my cheek.

Why did I speak up?

Can it stop?

I'm so stupid!

What is love? Why am I so....hurt?

Whats wrong with his picture?

Spots of blood everywhere.

I laugh too much.

I disappear.

What next?

Nothings on.

So annoying.

Why do i hate her? I've never meet her!

I'm a shell.

I'm different.

I try to be happy.

Why can't i be anything normal?

I made a mistake.

Can I fix it?

Can I fix me?

Why did I do that?

Untold, unknown.

All I see. All I believe.

Can I fix me?

Comments
Friday, 05 May 2006 07:09
I like this. Perhaps because I prefer this style of poetry...but more likely because I can feel when i read it.

keep writing
ENGINEANGEL
Friday, 05 May 2006 23:46
this is very powerful slice, good work. reminds me of river most out of all of the crew. again, very powerful :)

EngineAngel
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 06 May 2006 21:12
I liked this poem Slice. I could really feel the down tone and the hurt and identify with those feelings of my own.
Tuesday, 09 May 2006 17:56
I agree with the others here.. good work..

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