"All Is Bright" Conclusion: Revised

POSTED BY: HawkMoth
UPDATED: Wednesday, December 8, 2004 20:14
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HAWKMOTH

Wednesday, December 8, 2004 5:20 PM

I just noticed that in the copying and transferring of the last part of the story, I inadvertantly used an unrevised file. So there's a new paragraph that's kind of important to the flow of the storyline, in the middle of the gift exchange scene that takes place in the common area. (Right after Jayne tells someone to "shut up!" in Chinese).

http://www.fireflyfans.net/sunroomitem.asp?i=2778

Hope no one minds rereading that bit.

Thanks!

~~HawkMoth

GORRAMREAVERS

Wednesday, December 8, 2004 8:14 PM

Just wanna say I love your work HAWKMOTH.