The Big Damn English Project

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UPDATED: Thursday, September 28, 2006 19:55
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SHROUDED

Thursday, September 28, 2006 2:08 AM

Thanks for the suggestions, Don. I changed the few little tidbits. Lol, I think the only person 'Nara ISN'T respectful to is Mal, but that's just me. She even still treated Atherton with respect even after he insulted her. But hence, I was trying to find a way to fit what you said into it, so it's now just:

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A Companion, too, clearly high class.
She was respectable – none could surpass.

I tend to like that better anyhow.

I so want to add Miranda in now, but my mom would kill me if I told her, "Oh, yeah, and now I'm re-working the prologue." She already thinks I'm going overboard. -sigh- She just doesn't understand Firefly or Serenity, no matter what I do... But someday, someday... she'll be a Browncoat too.

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The only animals I'm not comfortable with are parrots, but I'm learning as I go. I'm getting better and better at 'em. I really am. - Steve Irwin, our Honorary BDH

SHROUDED

Thursday, September 28, 2006 2:12 AM

Heh heh heh, the menfolk here will have a little sum'n sum'n too, no worries. I mean, Kaylee's poem hints at when she first got the job...

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The only animals I'm not comfortable with are parrots, but I'm learning as I go. I'm getting better and better at 'em. I really am. - Steve Irwin, our Honorary BDH

SHROUDED

Thursday, September 28, 2006 7:55 PM

Got three more down, folks. Zoë, Wash, Book.

Zoë: http://www.fireflyfans.net/sunroomitem.asp?i=13185
Wash: http://www.fireflyfans.net/sunroomitem.asp?i=13186
Book: http://www.fireflyfans.net/sunroomitem.asp?i=13187

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The only animals I'm not comfortable with are parrots, but I'm learning as I go. I'm getting better and better at 'em. I really am. - Steve Irwin, our Honorary BDH

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