Noted FFF.net Member Wins Firefly Script Auction

POSTED BY: DonCoat
UPDATED: Wednesday, December 13, 2006 12:41
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DONCOAT

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 8:22 PM

Okay, folks, it's time to 'fess up. I was going to keep this on the QT, but it's just way too shiny not to share it with my fellow Browncoats.

I, DonCoat, am the crazy person who won the eBay auction for Adam Baldwin's script for Serenity (the pilot episode). It's here at DonCoat Manor, sitting within reach as I write this, and I must say -- it was worth every penny (especially since all those pennies went to a good cause).

Let me give you a little description. The package contained the following items: a nice personal thank-you note from Adam; an autographed photo of "The Man They Call Jayne" sandwiched between a couple of Serenity-logo publicity posters; and a neatly packaged script.

The script is a bit over 100 looseleaf pages held together with metal bendy tabs (not sure what those are called). The cover page is green, and is signed by all nine principals plus Joss and Tim Minear. There are a couple stains on the front and back covers -- you can imagine the cast munching on donuts as they sat down for their read-throughs. The interior pages are typed or printed on one side only. There are a number of revisions; those pages are green as well, and include a few extra pages (e.g. 18 and 18A). The final revision is dated July 24, 2002.

Now here's where things get really interesting.

Adam has highlighted all of his lines (or Jayne's, if you prefer) in yellow highlighter, except on the revised pages. In a few places he has written some comments in the margins. And some of those comments are fascinating, and even hi-larious.

Page 8: (the script is describing the Dortmunder and its captain. Adam's note: "The Boring People".

Page 30: after Mal's line, "Jayne, your mouth is talking. You might wanna look to that," the script gives Jayne's line as: "I'm ready to stop talking whenev --". Adam has written in, "--er and wherever you call it." Now, I haven't checked whether this line was shot with that extension on it, or if Adam just wanted clarification about what he was supposed to be saying so it would sound more natural when Mal cut him off. Either way it's pretty shiny.

Page 39: Adam got a little careless with the highlighter and left a mark in the margin. Maybe a random accident, but it happens to be just opposite Inara's line to Book and Mal: "It's all right. I mostly keep to myself. When I'm not whoring." So it doesn't seem too much of a stretch that Adam might have gotten wild with the marker because he was laughing along with the rest of the cast at that point.

Page 63: in the scene where the crew are discussing Simon's actions in forcing Mal to run from the Feds, Inara says "He didn't shoot her." Jayne's line is "But somebody on this boat did and I'm scratching my head as to why we ain't dealt with him." Adam's note to himself: Push their Buttons.

Page 82: discussing making the deal with Patience, Jayne says: "Still say there's gonna be gunplay." Adam writes: (happy)

And now we come to the real gem of the whole script. Jayne's last line comes on page 104, in the scene where Mal is asking him why he didn't take Dobson's bribe: "Well, that'll be an interesting day." Now, imagine the scene. Adam has been hired for the role of Jayne, and knows only a little bit about him (he's a mercenary, not too bright, not too dependable, etc.) The cast gets their script for the pilot episode and, for the first time, they read it through and get a real idea of the character they're going to be playing. And what's Adam's reaction?

I'll tell you what it is, because he wrote it down right there in the margin. And here's what he had to say about Jayne:

....... I like him! .......

Underscored twice.

Adam, we are all so very glad you did. You made him unforgettable.

So that's my initial impression of the Serenity script. I hope you enjoyed hearing about it. And if any of you folks were bidding against me, I offer my condolences, though I can't honestly say I'm sorry I outbid you. This stack of paper is now one of my most valued possessions, and it will soon

TRISTAN

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 8:32 PM

Thank you for sharing that with us! And at the same time, congratulations for winning the bid...and *kick*! Lucky so-and-so! ()
I was not aware that gorramn was spelt that way...now I'm gonna have to go back and edit all my posts...

Again, thanks for sharing the notes!

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GURNEY

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 8:37 PM

Wow! Congrats on the new shiny treasure and thanks for sharing it with us!

-Gurney

FIZZIX

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 8:40 PM

you have earned of the shinyness, and we bask in it's simulated prescence. *basking* Hey... we need to get some more sunscreen over here!

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May not be smart, and it may not please you, but you're definitely gonna see what I have to say.

DAYVE

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 8:45 PM

Congratulations DonCoat.... i have to say that i was in the bidding for a while.... you guys left me around the thousand dollar mark... and to say you won... well, that's shiny.... but winning has a price. And i think it was around 22 hundred bucks.... (for a good cause... good on ya DonCoat)

thanks for sharing.....

ECGORDON

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 8:51 PM

I looked up something in the Serenity Visual Companion the other day and noticed that spelling of gorramn. If I am not mistaken, all of the captions on the Firefly dvds have it spelled without the n, and the next time I watch the BDM I'll leave the captions on to check for that.

Congratulations on your shiny luck, Doncoat. I'm sure I'm not the only one a little bit envious.

wo men ren ran zai fei xing.

FOLLOWMAL

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 8:53 PM

Oh, DonCoat! What a prize! I'm so glad you won.. and that your money went to a worthy cause as well.

Thank you for sharing the insights... I can just see all that in my mind's eye the way you explained it.

Gorramn, huh? I like that.

"You hold. Hold 'til I get back." Mal

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DERANGEDMILK

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 8:55 PM

Well done DonCoat and thankyou for sharing. You are a shiny example to all us browncoats.
-e

"Storms getting worse."
"We'll pass through it soon enough."

NCBROWNCOAT

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 8:58 PM

Glad you got the script DonCoat. It sounds like each script will have something new and exciting. Just wish I had the coin to bid for one

MSG

Tuesday, August 15, 2006 9:04 PM

Don- thanks for sharing. It's a nice glimpse into their process and a moment in time I'd bet we all with we were there for:) You're sweet to share so generously:)

I choose to rise instead of fall- U2

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