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F R A Y (PT 2 - COMIC SCRIPT)

Thursday, August 23, 2007 11:39:54 PM

First Page:

SPLASH PANEL: very expressionist – blade runner meets caligari

The Blue Sun Building
Very Tall. Perspective makes it pinched at the bottom, wide at top –
Like a coffin or a vampyre with folded wings.
A cloak is also suggested by the large shadow the building casts.
Inky, bloody, black.

Edge of frame: A random vehicle light reveals FRAY crouching.

Inset: Panel: FRAY c/o her face. Tense.
“I can smell him – here.”

Second Page:

A series of 3 – 5 panels, frames overlapping, like jumps cuts or stills.
Gradual close up of building.
A winking light – inside..
Beats like a heart.

Panel 6: Clearly we are x-raying in now.
We see a plexi-glass coffin shape.
From the base come tubes and wires.

Panel 7: Long panel down right side of page.
C/o an arm – clearly some sort of astronaut or biohazard suit.
The gloved hand is rigid, talon like.
Man: “AAAAUUUUGGCCCH!!!”

Panel 8: left side of page.
More hands. Blue gloved hands.
A brief case snapping shut.
“Boiled in the bag again, huh?”
“Just like the others.”

Panel 9: two faces in shadow. Only the blue gloves resting the case are clearly visible.
“Put him in the protein freezer with the rest. –sigh-”
“Yes Sir.”

(by J/0)

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