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Fan Fic Discussion - Heartbroken by Channain

POSTED BY: Channain
UPDATED: Thursday, November 11, 2004 16:37
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CHANNAIN

Thursday, November 11, 2004 4:37 PM

Got a question? Ask it! Got feedback, love to hear it! Got some story sticklers I missed? Pass them on! The main goal is to make this story as true to Firefly as possible. I don't know how to write any other way.

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Originally posted by CastIronJack
On Part 3 - Good stuff, I particular like Cariveau's line about 'when and where to duck...'
On Part 4 - I loved the part with Jayne around the kitchen and when Mal was backpedaling from marrying one of the women from the ship. Inara's part was really good, you captured her very well.
On Part 5 - You know, this ship was just MEANT to run into Serenity. Now you've got the good Shepherd tied to it. The doc's scenes really stood out.

Thanks, CastIronJack - you picked out some of my favorite highlights. Especially turning Jayne into a babysitter. I figured he's got a brother, so he at least knows how to interact with boys... being such a big kid himself half the time.

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Blue Sun Comment by Amdobell on Part 8
Uh oh, now what Cariveau? I hope he's not intending any harm to our gallant Captain, *dong ma*?

Nah - wouldn't do to beat up your host, now would it? Both captains know very well, though, that it's always darkest just before it goes totally black. And considering how things have been going, just by suggesting that they could relax, Mal very easily could have put a hex on both ships. If there was wood in the infirmary, Siobhan would have been rapping her knuckles on it.

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Blue Sun Comment by Amdobell on Part 8
I was so surprised and happy to see this installment as it has been so long since the last one I was pretty much out of hope of seeing the story continued. Bravo! Ali D :~)
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Yeah, I'm a pretty pokey writer all right. I'd blame school but the funny thing is I write better when six other things are going on. It's an outlet for me, and an escape. Until the movie comes out, this and the other fabulous fics in here are the only ongoing Firefly fix that I get. I do have very THOROUGH beta readers, too, and all that that implies.

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