Beta Please

POSTED BY: mai
UPDATED: Friday, November 19, 2004 20:14
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MAI

Saturday, July 24, 2004 1:45 PM

I am looking for anyone willing to beta a new fan fic. I have just started writing, but hope to have the first part finished sometime this morning. Please, anyone?

Ok, so I couldn't wait. . . sue me. I went ahead and posted the first part.

PHAEDRA

Tuesday, November 2, 2004 7:03 PM

Are you still looking for a beta, cause I could use one too. Maybe we could help eachother out.

Phaedra

MAI

Wednesday, November 3, 2004 6:13 AM

As of now my story is pretty much on death's door. I would love some input so that maybe I can get it started again. I'd be more than happy to help you out as much as I can. Let me know. Thanks so much.

have a firefreakin'flytastic day

PHAEDRA

Friday, November 5, 2004 7:56 PM

Hey Mai-

I just finished reading your work. I really do like Bed Time Verse, especially the feeling that I get that they've somehow gone back in time. Phat do you have planned for it next. How can I be of use.

Justine

MAI

Saturday, November 6, 2004 9:18 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Phaedra:
Hey Mai-

I just finished reading your work. I really do like Bed Time Verse, especially the feeling that I get that they've somehow gone back in time. Phat do you have planned for it next. How can I be of use.

Justine

Justine,
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. First and formost it needs grammatical help. I think the rest is just the frustration of writer's block. I haven't even looked at this story for awhile because I'm just not sure how I want to go about explaining the connection between the story being read and Serenity mysteriously showing up in this "new" world. I was going for a time travelesqe thing. The woman and child that Mal just met of course being the one's who have been reading the bed time story. Something to do with the little girl's imagination and dreams about the story and it's characters. At the same time, exploring how Serenity's crew deals with this strange occurence. I was thinking of the next part having to do with dealing with the owners of the farm they landed on and toward the end the realization of where they are in time. Does any of that sound vaguely interesting? If you'd like me to help you out any I would be more than happy to. I love reading fanfic and I love it even more when people read and respond to my work. Thank you so much for taking the time to read through this story.

have a firefreakin'flytastic day

PHAEDRA

Thursday, November 18, 2004 7:47 PM

Hey I just finished a draft on the first installment of a series I'm working. Would you mind if I emailed it to you for a little review?

Phaedra

Also hows bedtime verse coming along, you just can't leave them there. If your looking for inspriation I just saw a great movie called Happy Accident that may give you some good time travel theory.

MAI

Friday, November 19, 2004 10:14 AM

So far my story is still just waiting to write itself. I haven't had much time to spend on it. I'd love to read your story! I will help as much as I can.

have a firefreakin'flytastic day

PHAEDRA

Friday, November 19, 2004 6:21 PM

Thanks. How should I send it to you?

MAI

Friday, November 19, 2004 8:14 PM

oh sorry. please just send it to my alter email
iamsusie2 @ hotmail.com i can't wait to read it. thanks for sharing with me. maybe one day i will actually find a few hours to get my story back in gear.

have a firefreakin'flytastic day