Dire Straights - New Fanfic

POSTED BY: geordiesteve2003
UPDATED: Wednesday, August 11, 2004 09:05
VIEWED: 2055
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GEORDIESTEVE2003

Monday, March 29, 2004 8:04 PM

Mal is injured, Serenity is on the run, and things go downhill from there. Zoe has to try and hold everyone together and find a way out.

Any reviews, comments, appreciated.

Thanks

Stephen

GEORDIESTEVE2003

Friday, April 9, 2004 10:22 PM

Comments from some reviews so far.

jebbypal said:

Great job of throwing us into the thick of things. Its interesting to see a tense struggle situation told from Simon's perspective.

nkb said:

Wisecracks, tension, Chinese slang and the use of ‘gorram’, what more do you need in the first part of your fanfic? Oh yeah – the rollicking story too!

Great characterisation and really good flow.

I love the way the narrative sounds like it's Simon's internal voice - and reflects his bias against Jayne so completely!

Bring on the next bit :)

Comments and reviews appreciated.

GEORDIESTEVE2003

Wednesday, August 11, 2004 9:05 AM

Third and final part of this is up. Comments appreciated.