Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Under the Tejas Sun

Monday, May 1, 2006

When the shuttle breaks down, Zoë and Wash have to figure a way of gettin’ it fixed...without killing each other first. Pre-Series.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1882    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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"Ta ma de...well, that tears it." Wash flicked the sweat trickling past his cheek with his thumb and grimaced at the hellish New Tejas' sun. Defeated, he flung the wrench across his path and watched as a mocking cloud of dust pooled around his feet. The wrench added one more piece of clutter to the bright copper, tile, and tin starter parts and the litter almost resembled a bouquet of broken desert flowers.

Zoë’s frown deepened. "No luck, huh?"

"Nope. We're humped, but good."

She sighed, but thought twice about leaning against the dead shuttle's side knowing the hull temp would've melted her vest clean through. Ain't fit for a snake underground out here, she thought, but at least the cargo's safe. She cupped a hand over her brow, checking for snipers in the far and near distance, but relaxed when the horizon was free from telltale metal glints. No enemies as far as she could see. Her eyebrow rose after the pilot swore under his breath.

Well. Present company excluded.

Off her look, Wash grit his teeth. He yanked the wrench from the ground and slammed it into the toolbox. "And what's that supposed to mean?"

Feigning ignorance, Zoë picked invisible crumbs from her vest and for the umpteenth time wished for Bester on a platter. The mechanic was a royal pi-gu but she'd got nothing but static hailing Serenity for over two hours - which was bad on two accounts. Sounded like the mechanic and the Cap got themselves in a mess...while she was stuck down here on a desert moon, with the jabbering flyboy.

She sighed deep. "So. What're you mouthin' off about now, pilot?"

"Don't hand me that." He was dangerously pink from the heat while a deeper flush crept up his neck. Zoë watched him with a small smirk. If he were a kettle he'd be whistling. "You've been givin' me hell for three months, lady, and I'm gettin' pretty damn tired of it."

She bent down and poked through the scattering of parts, dismissing him. "Which one o' these is the broken piece? Might be able to

Comments
Monday, 01 May 2006 17:57
This is fantastic. I'm a fan. You really mush write more.
Monday, 01 May 2006 18:49
Wow, and thats just great writing here. There just isn't enough of how Wash and Zoe were pre- series... well, not 'nuff for me, anyway. Shinyness galore, here. LOVE IT!!!

-Danny
Monday, 01 May 2006 19:46
very good!

As Wash said himself, they're a comlicated couple and you did very well to capture them before the series.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 01 May 2006 20:25
Brava. Was the name of the planet a nod to his role in that western mini-series whose name escapes me? Now, write the hook-up.
NINA
Monday, 01 May 2006 21:02
Thank you, everyone, for the comments! I enjoyed experimenting with Wash & Zoe's background. I really don't expect it was smooth for either of 'em, but that's what makes discovering what might have been intriguing.

Oh, Anonymous (could I call you 'mous')? I haven't actually miniseries (Into the West--?), but I want to. I might try reting it soon.
NINA
Monday, 01 May 2006 21:11
Argh, that should read, "seen the miniseries" :p. I'm editing too fast.
Monday, 01 May 2006 21:13
Love it! Always wanted to see how Wash won her round. Lovely story, funny and sexy!
Monday, 01 May 2006 22:38
Wow. This is really well written. I'm not a fan of a lot of the Zoe/Wash fanfic but this was pretty good!

Taya
PIXIE4MIRANDA
Tuesday, 02 May 2006 02:41
Ahh.. Amore.. a story of Wash and Zoe, without dinos.. and well written, rare.. I enjoyed it.
p4m
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 13:07
I think you captured the characters really well. I could hear Zoe and Wash having an encounter like this in the early days.

Write more!
Friday, 07 July 2006 12:49
ah, nothin' like sunburn an' a broken shuttle to make the ladies swoon.

b

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