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Heartbeat

Saturday, April 15, 2006

drabble written to prompt word hear.
River story.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1345    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Heartbeat

Author: bookishtype

Characters: River, Kaylee

Prompt: Hear

Word Count: 100 (ba-doom is 2 words; ba-boom is 2 words; badoombadoombadoombadoom is 1 word)

Rating: PG - for reference to violence and death

She could hear their hearts as they rounded the corner.

Ba-doom ba-doom ba-doom

She could hear Kaylee's heart as she pointed the gun and couldn't pull the trigger.

Badoombadoombadoombadoom

She heard her own heart as she looked at the soldiers, closed her eyes and pulled the trigger.

Boom boom boom boom

She heard silence as they fell to the floor to dead.

She heard Kaylee's heart overcome with fear.

Ba-boom boom ba-boom boom

She could hear her heartbeat never changing.

Boom boom boom boom.

Above all this girl could hear her own heart breaking.

Boom.

Comments
Saturday, 15 April 2006 12:52
Whoa...excellent!
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Saturday, 29 April 2006 00:50
that's really good! i really like it!
Saturday, 24 June 2006 14:40
awesome.

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