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Tuesday, April 11, 2006

A little discussion between Simon and Inara.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1470    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The courtesan was dressed impeccably, despite the informal occasion and the painful hour of the evening. Inara never let a soul see her as anything less than proud. She was wearing a gown of silk, shimmering bracelets, and golden earrings, sitting upright- not leaning back- in the examination chair.

Though he was dressed in a simple pullover shirt and comfortable trousers, the man in the room with her seemed almost as regal as she did. Not a hair on his head was out of place and there was not a trace of a whisker on his cheek. “Tidy” is how one of their shipmates referred to him.

After injecting the medication into her outstretched arm, he walked back to his supply cabinet, speaking in a firm but quiet voice. “That should take care of you,” he said. “You won’t need this stuff again for…three weeks.”

She said, “Thank you, Dr. Tam.”

He turned, smiling, “Will you ever start calling me Simon again?”

Inara smiled back, “That is…difficult for me now.”

He shook his head in mock consternation. After a second he stopped and looked at her intently. His voice became softer, but very serious. “So tell me, really, how have you been feeling lately?”

“Good. Very good, actually.” She forced herself to laugh. “If I didn’t know something was wrong with me, I would never have been able to tell it.”

“Well, I’m going to do everything I can. You know that.”

She answered, “I do know that.”

After a moment, with difficulty, he said, “Would you ever have dreamed we’d end up out here? Both of us? When I think back…”

“I try not to.” She did not like thinking about the past.

She continued, though, in a moment. “We’re doing what we have to. You especially…Simon.” He looked away as she added, “I’ll admit it, you aren’t really what one thinks of when you hear the word ‘outlaw,’ but you make a good one.”

“I’m not an outlaw,” he said, “no matter what they called me on those waves. And I’m not a hard-boiled rogue or some scheming terrorist who raids hospitals. I just had to get my sister out of that place.”

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 19:45
Aaah! Inara has- what, cancer? And Simon contracted with her??? Interesting. Very well-written, though :)

-wingedraksha
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 20:40
I love this. I'd love to read more. I wonder if that line from OOG--"I don't wanna die at all."--is Inara's deep dark secret. Sigh, the mysteries of the Joss 'verse....

~kaynara
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 21:37
I loved this too, and would definitely love to read more. The character of Inara interests me and I love to see how people flush out things from her life before Serenity.

Could you be bribed into writing more?? *grin*

Jenn
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 21:41
You mean Shinon, yes? Not Sinon? Might want to correct that.

Interesting that you have Simon having met Inara on that drunk night.
2X2
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 21:44
Yes! I really liked this... nicely written and I'd love to see more!
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 01:03
This was a great glimpse at Simon and Inara's relationship, one I think could definitely be explored more! They have a very interesting dynamic. I would love to read more of your stuff, please continue to write!:D
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 07:51
Ooh...gotta admit I like the premise and the dialogue you threw down here. A bit too stilted for seemingly after the BDM (cuz you mentione Wash being gone) for the two of them, but maybe that's the point;)

Though I do have one quibble: if Inara has something like cancer, it must be a rather slow acting (but deadly if she did some crazy things before leaving Sihnon) one cuz it's about two years between when the flashback from "Out of Gas" occurred and the end of the BDM. Still..excellent speculation about why Inara would have left home for adventures in the Black on Serenity.

BEB
SLANDREW
Wednesday, 12 April 2006 15:56
Thanks for the comments and criticisms, I'm very appreciative of both. I've been a Browncoat since the beginning and have visited this site for years (the people who post here are an incredible group); I don't normally write fiction, but I thought I'd throw my hat into the wring as to how Joss would cause more misery for our crew.

Thanks again.

PS. 'Sinon' didn't seem right to me, either, but I think that's how they spelled it in the visual companion. I could be wrong, though.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 17:41
Oh come on... No more to this????? I really liked it and could so get into more on this story line...
Wednesday, 14 June 2006 18:41
ooh, intrigue...

b

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