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In the Dark - Part III

Monday, April 10, 2006

While Gabriel and Kaylee make their way through the dark tunnels, Mal and the rescue party come one step closer to finding the wayward crewmembers. Meanwhile, the situation on Serenity explodes.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1928    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Any idea how far we walked?” Kaylee inquired, gritting her teeth as a sudden rise in the floor jostled her broken arm.

“Calculatin’ our varied rate of travel with the amount of time, bein’ five hours, that we’ve been movin’,” Gabriel replied, “ I’d say somewhereabouts sixteen dekameters, or one point six klicks.”

Kaylee’s suddenly slack jaw had trouble moving in a fashion that could produce words. “You... Um...” *Just when I think this kid can’t surprise me no more...* “So... bein’ as you’re so smart an’ all, does that tell you anything about if’n we’re headed in the right direction?”

“Not a clue,” came Gabriel’s immediate response. “That’s River’s brain’s department, an’ she ain’t here.” Although Kaylee could see nothing, she could feel a shift in his body ahead of her that let her know he glanced over his shoulder toward her. “I keep tellin’ ya, I ain’t all that smart. I just... read a lot.”

Kaylee had a bit of trouble with believing that.

“You need to stop for a minute?” Gabriel queried.

Although he could not see her, Kaylee reflexively shook her head. “Little over a kilometer and a half, even with a broken arm, ain’t nothin’ at this speed,” she responded. “I’m a bit more worried about your head.”

“My head’s fine,” Gabriel insisted.

“We pulled a heist on Boros ‘bout seven months ago,” Kaylee began, “ an’ Jayne ended up gettin’ clocked over the head pretty hard by an old woman with a fish club. I remember Simon examining him after, an’ he told me that blood in the ear canal was a better sign than clear fluid.”

“Clear fluid means cerebrospinal, which means I’d be dead, more’n like, or at least unconscious, by now. An’ since you insist on havin’ such worry over it, I’m woozy, dizzy, an’ havin’ trouble thinkin’ straight.”

Kaylee sighed. “I thought you said you weren’t a doctor.”

Gabriel was silent for several seconds. “I read a lot,” he stated, an excuse that already was becoming rather worn.

There were several more long minutes of silent travel before Kaylee gave in and asked, “Are you p

Comments
Monday, 10 April 2006 22:00
I really love the conversation between Kaylee and Gabriel. Please keep up the good work, this is an excellent fic.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 00:21
Well, at least Gabriel is finally talking some! This is great. I'm anxious to see what's next!
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 00:23
Your dialog is really excellent. Love your work!
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 05:50
Oh...this series is seriously ruining my calm, with three different scenarios presuably coming to a head together sometime in the future. It's a great feeling;)

BEB
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 06:24
Oooh very good, but is anyone else creeped out by Zoe's sudden intense headache? And poor Jayne. And Gabriel and Kaylee look to be having company that isn't our BDHs if I'm not mistaken, gulp! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 12:08
Something is apparently going on with Zoe. A while back she wasn't feeling so hot. I remember some fans thought she may have a bun in the oven, but since this takes place quite awhile after Serenity and Wash has been gone for awhile it isn't likely :-(
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 18:26
I feel like I know this Gabriel character from somewhere. Necro.

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