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GENIUS SERIES: 27. "Cutting the Strings"

Monday, April 10, 2006

"You can fool all the people some of the time and some of the people all of the time but you can't fool all of the people all the time."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4192    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "CUTTING THE STRINGS"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: G.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "DESPERATE MEASURES"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "You can fool all the people some of the time

and some of the people all of the time, but you can't fool all

of the people all the time."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"CUTTING THE STRINGS"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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The Director had passed puzzlement and non-comprehension hours ago. Now he was working through disbelief and well on his way to rage. Gabriel Tam sat quietly in his chair, no expression on his face. At last the man stopped pacing and turned to face him. "What do you mean she just *left*? Your wife is a Councillor, Gabriel. A member of this Parliament, *dong ma*?"

"*Wo dong* but you must understand my wife is..." He paused, just shy of theatrical. "Passionate about her children."

*Her* children. The wording was not lost on the Director. He cooled his anger so that he could think dispassionately, his beady eyes boring critical holes into Gabriel Tam. "Why do I think you had some hand in this?"

Gabriel raised an eyebrow. "The only arguments I have ever had with my wife," He said calmly. "Is over the children." He paused and shrugged, his nonchalence beginning to set off a deeper irritation in the Director but then Gabriel Tam had always affected him that way. "She no longer listens to anything I have to say about them or their welfare."

The Director's eyes narrowed like twin lasers. "Meaning?"

"She is acting on her own. Certainly the matter was never discussed with me beyond a barely coherent ranting and raving

Comments
Monday, 10 April 2006 15:21
Ohh, excellent chapter! What the hell is Gabriel up to! He thinks he's lost Simon but River is still out there...doesn't he know they are together? Hmmm....

I'm definitely eager to know what you do with Simon and Kaylee's - well, whatever they have.

Am really loving this and am eager to read more - sooner rather than later, k? :)
Monday, 10 April 2006 15:23
Another great installment Ali! How can Simon NOT know he's a reader, he's meant to be top 3 percent. Mind you, he was in denial about River so it shou'dn't be a surprise.

Can't wait to read the bext one...

Thanks for sharing
Monday, 10 April 2006 15:44
Grr! The spaces between installments is bad!! :P More soon! Good chapter :D
Monday, 10 April 2006 16:00
I want to see where you take Kaylee and Simon as well. A lovely series!!!
Monday, 10 April 2006 22:14
And now the hunt begin in earnest....;)

Excellent work here, AMDOBELL. Really interested in seeing where the next chapter takes the BDHs and the Readers. Though you seriously creeped me out with Gabriel full-flung thoughts on recreating the human race as like River, but with Vulcan-like logic driving them:O

BEB
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Tuesday, 11 April 2006 04:51
And it's confirmed that Gabriel Tam is the verse's worst father. I really like that I now understand where Simon's dislike of Mal Reynold's comes from, and like that he's of two minds about the captain.

I can't wait for the next part!

Tuesday, 11 April 2006 12:30
Going to Haven is a stroke of brilliance by you and Mal.

Gabriel has become totally evil, I want to see what he tries next & how he's defeated.
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 13:43
Wonderful so far...well written...the suspense is killing me. more soon!!

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