Author's Notes:
Yeah, there's more than nine. More like eleven, and the epilogue. Ah well.
You know the drill. Feedback at kaylee@kikiroxxorz.com is appreciated. Also, for timeline purposes, I am George Lucas. I worked backwards. This takes place immediately preceding the first part. So, I suppose, you should read them:
2, 3, 4, 5, 1, 6, 7, 8, 9 if you're new to the series.
A somewhat happy ending. Weird? I think so.
Warnings, etc:
Warnings from the previous La Cienega Just Smiled stories:
Read with caution. There's some topical matter, namely who's paired with whom, that might be offensive.
Any problems can be directed to my dear and fluffy muse, Ryan Adams. He sings, I write.
"Now I hold you close in the back of my mind, feels so good, but damn, it makes me hurt
I’m too scared to know how I feel about you now
La cienega just smiles and says “I’ll see you ‘round.”
Now I hold you close in the back of my mind
Raise my glass cause either way I’m dead
Neither of you really help me to sleep anymore
One breaks my body and the other breaks my soul
La cienega just smiles and waves goodbye."
~Ryan Adams, La Cienega Just Smiled
***
There’s a long road ahead. There’s tears and laughter, misunderstandings and harsh words, kisses and cuddles and vows exchanged in a field, and in the end, a Tempest.
There’s a long road ahead, but in the end, it will all turn out good.
***
“So, li’l one, your brother’s comin’ back, is he?”
River regards Mal, considering how best to answer. “The long and winding road will lead him back to her heart,” she replies, an affirmative. Mal shakes his head. “Ready to fly, there, li’l one?”
“Are you?”
“Ready as I’ll ever be, I ‘spect.”
“Then we should probably tell Wash that now is not the greatest or most convenient time to decide to try and make little Washes, and that he should get his lazy ass to the cockpit.”
Under normal circumstances, Mal would be repulsed by what his resident psychic genius just told him, but he’s so happy
Can we, uhm, see that? Please. I can beg, you know :)
I never expected this little story to have a happy ending for Simon and Kaylee. You've done well.
Of course, I do feel sorry for River, since she and Kaylee got close too. Maybe explain why she wanted to Kaylee back together with her brother rather than just stay with Kaylee herself? She knew Kaylee would never be truly happy without her brother? She knew she had hurt Simon by taking just one more thing away from him (among all the others he had given up when rescuing her?)
There's an Epilogue? Please post it soon!
I'd love for you to go back and add more about people's feelings and how it all happened in the first place, but, that's just because I'm a huge fan of description, not because this story isn't good as it:)
Damn, I don't think I've ever written such a long review! :)
Still...this has been an excellent series so far looking at the possible consequences of Kaylee and Simon hooking up after a traumatic event like Miranda Wave broadcast. Plus, I can really see how Kaylee would get all doubting Thomas about things and back off...girl hates conflict.
BEB
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