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La Cienega Just Smiled--part 9 of (?)

Sunday, April 2, 2006

River explains some things. Not well, but she explains them.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2393    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author's Notes:

Yeah, there's more than nine. More like eleven, and the epilogue. Ah well.

You know the drill. Feedback at kaylee@kikiroxxorz.com is appreciated. Also, for timeline purposes, I am George Lucas. I worked backwards. This takes place immediately preceding the first part. So, I suppose, you should read them:

2, 3, 4, 5, 1, 6, 7, 8, 9 if you're new to the series.

A somewhat happy ending. Weird? I think so.

Warnings, etc:

Warnings from the previous La Cienega Just Smiled stories:

Read with caution. There's some topical matter, namely who's paired with whom, that might be offensive.

Any problems can be directed to my dear and fluffy muse, Ryan Adams. He sings, I write.

"Now I hold you close in the back of my mind, feels so good, but damn, it makes me hurt

I’m too scared to know how I feel about you now

La cienega just smiles and says “I’ll see you ‘round.”

Now I hold you close in the back of my mind

Raise my glass cause either way I’m dead

Neither of you really help me to sleep anymore

One breaks my body and the other breaks my soul

La cienega just smiles and waves goodbye."

~Ryan Adams, La Cienega Just Smiled

***

There’s a long road ahead. There’s tears and laughter, misunderstandings and harsh words, kisses and cuddles and vows exchanged in a field, and in the end, a Tempest.

There’s a long road ahead, but in the end, it will all turn out good.

***

“So, li’l one, your brother’s comin’ back, is he?”

River regards Mal, considering how best to answer. “The long and winding road will lead him back to her heart,” she replies, an affirmative. Mal shakes his head. “Ready to fly, there, li’l one?”

“Are you?”

“Ready as I’ll ever be, I ‘spect.”

“Then we should probably tell Wash that now is not the greatest or most convenient time to decide to try and make little Washes, and that he should get his lazy ass to the cockpit.”

Under normal circumstances, Mal would be repulsed by what his resident psychic genius just told him, but he’s so happy

Comments
Sunday, 02 April 2006 20:08
>“He’s going to throw your clothes on the floor anyway,” she replies.

Can we, uhm, see that? Please. I can beg, you know :)

I never expected this little story to have a happy ending for Simon and Kaylee. You've done well.
Of course, I do feel sorry for River, since she and Kaylee got close too. Maybe explain why she wanted to Kaylee back together with her brother rather than just stay with Kaylee herself? She knew Kaylee would never be truly happy without her brother? She knew she had hurt Simon by taking just one more thing away from him (among all the others he had given up when rescuing her?)

There's an Epilogue? Please post it soon!

I'd love for you to go back and add more about people's feelings and how it all happened in the first place, but, that's just because I'm a huge fan of description, not because this story isn't good as it:)

Damn, I don't think I've ever written such a long review! :)
Monday, 03 April 2006 02:37
Gotta back Leiasky up here and say I wasn't expecting any kind of happy ending here...at least not right away. Maybe by the stage stories like the one with River and Kaylee together while River undergoes surgery a hidden complex (forgot the series name, sadly) but not so soon after this would have occurred.

Still...this has been an excellent series so far looking at the possible consequences of Kaylee and Simon hooking up after a traumatic event like Miranda Wave broadcast. Plus, I can really see how Kaylee would get all doubting Thomas about things and back off...girl hates conflict.

BEB
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 19:23
i guess it's a happy ending...

b

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