Red Herring
By Kristin Matte
Scene I
The air-lock door was still descending as Mal walked out to its ledge. He took in long
breaths of fresh air as he surveyed the land. Lush meadows, green trees, brown earth and
blue skies, it had been near a decade since he'd last been on Pernox. As he stood in
silence watching the sunrise, he could hear the steady, focused stride of Zoë 's boots.
“Wash wants to know when to set our departure time for, sir.” She stated.
“Well, tell him ideally, sunset.”
“Ideally?”
“Ideally.”
“So then most-like tomorrow?” She quipped.
“Most like,” Mal responded, eyes fixated on the land.
Zoë was off as quickly as she had come, and her methodically paced prowl was replaced
with the soft-steps of Kaylee. She was almost skipping, and Mal could hear her humming
and singing. He didn't have to turn around, nobody in the `verse could be that chipper this
early in the morning, he thought. She perkily stepped up next to him, and looked out onto
the vast plains that surrounded them. Her hands were on her hips as she slowly twisted
her torso right-to-left and left-to-right, as if listening to a song nobody else could hear.
“Sure looks like it's gonna be a beautiful day. Shame be'n cooped up in that engine room,” Kaylee flirted, innocently.
“No it ain't,” Mal said matter-of-factly. “You love that engine room. Who am I to deprive
you of all that wrenchin’ and hammerin’?” Mal looked forward, never making eye contact with Kaylee as he spoke. “That's important technical stuff that needs do'n if we plan on getting to Red Herring on time.”
“I know Cap'n,” she paused, “but how often do we get sunny days like this in the middle of the black?”
“Well if we lived in the sun Kaylee, we'd be dead.”
“Cap’n....” Kaylee whined.
“Fine,” he huffed, it didn't seem like he had much of a choice, having her pouting in the
engine room would only slow her down anyway, “You can take a two hour leave, but not a minute more Kaylee, and I mean it.”
“Thanks Cap
Title: Red Herring
Author: xKristinx
Email: kristinmatte@yahoo.com
Permission to archive: Sure, please credit me though.
Fandom(s): Firefly
Genre: General Fiction
Rating: PG
Summary: Picks up where the series was cut-off. . .
Warnings: A pretty long read, but I think it's pretty good. (I like myself).
Notes: I wrote this as a creative piece for a my Controversies in Feminism class, I also have a theoretical component if you're interested.
Acknowledgments: Joss owns my ass.
Keep up writing, you can only get better. :)
Have to back AgentRouka here...spelling is kinda knarly. I know I am willing to lend a hand (as other Browncoats) in beta reading any future fics. And a couple of things jumped out at me that could possibly stand to be altered (I made footnotes in the edited document!)
Still...a good first effort! Can't wait for the next one;)
BEB
I look forward to any comments or critiques.
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