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Memories - Part III

Friday, March 31, 2006

conclusion to wash/zoë story (ok you know how it ends)

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“I don't trust that Badger.”

“What is there to trust?” Mal reasoned. “He’s a pathetic weasel with a delusion of standing. But he has work, that’s all we need.”

“Still, I have a bad feeling Sir. It felt as though he was leavin’ something out.”

“That’ll make it all the more interesting!”

“Interesting…?”

“Hey Wash! Thought I told you to stay on ship!” Mal barked as Wash up the ramp on the mule.

“That you did, but Kaylee wanted some paint so bein’ the gentleman I -”

“What the guay does she need paint for?”

Wash shrugged and Mal marched off yelling “Kaylee!”

~

“Hey Wash, how’d it go?”

“Got green and this red colour. What do you think?” I held the tins up for inspection by Kaylee.

“Green?!” Mal said incredulously. “You’re painting the kitchen green?!”

You have no vision Cap’ain! It’ll be great! Look! I got stencils! Ain’t you interested in makin’ this boat a home?”

“Wait, can’t it be a home without being green?” I interjected.

“Never thought I’d have occasion to say this but Wash has a point,” Mal said looking genuinely scared.

“Just trust me! I need to do something while we’re docked.”

“Vandal!” Mal cried as Kaylee left the engine room humming.

“What’s Kaylee vandalising?” Zoë asked, coming up the stairs.

“The kitchen,” Mal said in way of explaination, heading up to the bridge. “I’m contacting Inara. See if she’s still on schedule.”

“Just what she’ll want after a hard day’s work,” I said to myself more than anyone. I watched Zoë follow Mal, my eyes glancing over her curves. She was so beautiful it hurt.

~

The closer to the outer rim, the dodgier the job, the more likely something will go wrong. ‘Versally accepted. And there was defiantly something in Badger’s mannerisms that suggested he suspected something very specific would happen. I didn’t like Badger. His smarmy grin and his look that made me want to pun

Comments
Friday, 31 March 2006 21:11
:-D Hurray for the 'verse's shiniest couple.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 01 April 2006 15:28
That is so sweet and cute and funny. I cried when I read that last section. Beautiful.
Sunday, 02 April 2006 01:28
That was pretty good. I love Wash and Zoe stories, but the only thing I have to complain about, is the end, it made me sad. :( Why o why did Wash have to die! Other than that, I also like how you put theirs stories in their POV. Keep going..it only gets better from here.
-Tonya
Thursday, 20 April 2006 14:49
*tear* poor Zoe, it was all warm and fuzzy, why couldn't you have left it with the warm and fuzzy. *tear* no rea
Thursday, 20 April 2006 14:49
*tear* poor Zoe, it was all warm and fuzzy, why couldn't you have left it with the warm and fuzzy. *tear* no rea
Thursday, 20 April 2006 14:49
*tear* poor Zoe, it was all warm and fuzzy, why couldn't you have left it with the warm and fuzzy. *tear* no really, i liked this
Monday, 22 May 2006 06:51
yes, the emotion of the last bit after the whoel story. good stuff. you are a gifted writer. You might could check out some of my stories, as Wash is my fav, you'll find him fetured.
Sunday, 04 June 2006 12:51
poor zoe...*sobs*

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BLKHERO69
Sunday, 01 February 2009 07:44
I just found this arc and am SO glad I did! Being the huge Zoe/Gina Torres fan I am, I appreciate you bringing this tale to the 'Verse. The ending was powerful, didnt see it coming. Looking foward to reading more of you work

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