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No Child Of The Air

Friday, March 24, 2006

Simon/River. Mermaids. Written for the shinyhearts Valentines ficathon, which said to rewrite a famous lovestory with a Firefly pairing. -- Bitter-sweet.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3139    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Inspired by: "The Little Mermaid" by Hans Christian Andersen

Many thanks: to sarahjane for beta-kindness.

PG-13

Simon/River (Yes, Crazy Space Incest)

Spoilers for the whole series.

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No Child Of The Air

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He lives the life of a prince, before.

Osiris, a sea of polished surfaces, where hardship is rumor, a muffled noise drifting in from faraway shores. Bountiful Osiris, moist with its riches.

His mouth speaks the language, his hands work miracles and he navigates the eternal sliver-blue of Capital City with familiar competence, one sparkling swimmer among many.

People mistake his ease for grace but he knows better. He has seen grace and she is not of this world, a gift of unknown Gods, who carries weightless suspension with her wherever she goes.

Inhabitant of all elements, she dances on the water surface, spheres that she alone can reach, and her toes send ripples downward, gentle bodyless caress.

River.

There are horizons in her eyes, longing to expand.

"It's so far away, meimei."

"But I want to go. It's a challenge, Simon. It'll be such a challenge."

The siren song draws her away to the land and listlessly he floats, waiting for an echo of her touch.

It takes so long for him to hear her cries.

When they come, they are distorted and crumbled by liquid distance.

"They’re hurting us."

The entire world tastes of her tears and no one will believe it. It's the nature of the sea to be bitter, to be salty, but he never knew before.

People own smiles like an armour of scales, shimmer without value.

"I will not come for you."

In the end, it is in the murky depths that he finds help.

"Money. And luck."

He sells his life for the chance to be her hero. He sells his world and his voice for a sea witch's potion that sears and cuts and leaves him walking in a foreign world.

Walking on knives, with unfamiliar feet.

He bites back the p

Comments
Friday, 24 March 2006 16:20
sure you can...go to 'manage my content' find the story you want to delete and then delete it :)
Friday, 24 March 2006 16:29
Crap, you're right! I'm such a dummy not to find that... Thanks for letting me know! I'll appreciate it next time. :D
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 March 2006 21:32
wow, i really enjoyed this. beautiful writing, and i like the way you included lines from the show.

"Osiris, a sea of polished surfaces, where hardship is rumor, a muffled noise drifting in from faraway shores."
-that line especially is lovely

~kaynara
Wednesday, 31 May 2006 12:22
andersen's little mermaid is one of my favourite children's stories, and you've combined it with my other favourite perfectly.

b
Wednesday, 13 September 2006 03:20
This is beautiful and sublime, thank you. Made me cry, too.
This tale is so fitting for them. I chose to interpret it metaphorically as I'm not into CSI, but yes, Simon is not a child of air but he survives on such a meagure reward of River's good moments.

"An eternity of dirt and metal stretches out before him" - gave me shivers.

Simon and River tend to bring fairy tales to mind: Hansel and Gretel, and another one by Andersen: about Eliza and her 12 brothers turned to swans and how she had to knit shirts out of nettles for them to break an evil spell. And Simon always fits the sister's/female roles in those tales, somehow.

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