Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Off the Wagon pt 2

Thursday, March 23, 2006

100 drabble written for the prompt word: touch.
Simon/Kaylee. Written for LJ's Firefly100

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1463    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Off the Wagon pt 2

Author: bookishtype

Prompt: touch

Word Count: 100

Character: Simon, Kaylee

Rating:

She lay there. Still. He had done what he could. Nothing left to do but wait.

Her breathing had subsided into slow soft rushes of air. She was beautiful even asleep. Even on the infirmary bed. Her cheeks still rosy pink. Her hair fluffed out around her heart shaped face.

It was all he could do but not touch her. Stroke her cheek, hold her hand. He had stopped himself so many times before. She shifted slightly. Her eyelids fluttered. And then nothing. Just sleep.

He reached out. Traced her cheekbone to her lips.

‘Simon”, she murmured.

”Shhh”, he replied.

Comments
Thursday, 23 March 2006 13:55
Great...um more please?
Monday, 03 July 2006 18:25
*stands up* hi, my name is bellona and i'm a wagon addict.

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Tuesday, 12 September 2006 17:46
Hadn't ever read this so when I saw it come up in the little teasers at the top of the Blue Sun Room, had to read. Of course, I wish it was longer. :)

>He reached out. Traced her cheekbone to her lips.

Very visual and sensory piece. Nicely done.

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