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Play A Player

Tuesday, March 21, 2006

A fluffy Mal/Inara drabble, set right after "Trash". -- Response to the prompt "None of it means a damn thing."

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This was written for a random prompt challenge at my lj, and I like it enough to share here. *g*

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Set right after "Trash".

Rated PG

Fluffy.

Prompt: Mal/Inara. None of it means a damn thing.

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Play A Player

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She sat on the floor, legs folded and eyes closed, obviously meditating.

Perfect timing, in other words.

Mal strolled in with a bounce to his step, thumbs hooked through well-worn suspenders.

"So, Inara..."

It was a little disappointing when she didn't startle. Indeed, open eyes didn't seem to be a requirement at all. She just remained as she was.

"Are you dressed again?"

He chuckled, planting himself a few feet from her in a solid, haughty stance. Trying to stop bouncing on his heels.

"A Companion oughtn't be shy of a body in its natural state of undress, now."

Serenely, she raised her brows. "And I am not."

Well. No need for idle palaver.

"You see..." The pause was very deliberate. "I had myself a little chat with Saffron on the way to Haymer's floaty island."

And Inara frowned, eyes still closed. For a split of a second only but it was worth a triumphant grin because he knew she'd hear it in his voice.

"Turns out, I was a little off track in my assumptions regarding her previous stay aboard this ship."

Now she looked at him. All calm in a way that could only mean she really wasn't.

"Were you?"

He nodded. Once. Waiting for her to go on.

She just blinked back at him. Not playing.

Killjoy.

"Ain't nothing to be ashamed of, Inara." He added a little whine to his voice. The irritating kind. "I'm a pretty fella. S'lots of women woulda taken advantage of the situation to kiss me."

Oh. He baredly contained a gleeful giggle, watching a blush creep up her face. This was good .

But instead of sputtering, she just stood up, all water-like. And shrugged. With one shoulder.

"It's not like the feeling is entirely unreciprocated.

Comments
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 22:08
"He coughed. Suavely." Oh, Mal...

Cute story. I feel nice and giggly.
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 22:13
Ahhh! What a tease you are AR! You're worse than Inara! Write another one where they finally kiss, I'm dying here!

Which is to say... Whoa. Good drabble.

And go Inara for turning it back at him.

ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 22:32
"She licked her lips. So did he. His own lips, that was."

Awww, Mal/Inara fluff? On this site? Never thought I'd see the day. Well, actually, it's still kinda angsty. Those two just can't make it easy, huh?

Very sweet fic, AR.

~kaynara
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 22:37
I love this!! Inara torturing Mal is just something that I adore! Great Job!
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 22:37
Very nice.
I too giggled at the 'suavely' comment!
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 23:23
hehe. that was giggly, and wonderful. thank you. I can't stop smiling!
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 23:53
I could so see Inara doing this. Oh yeah, feminine wiles abound. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 00:07
Hehe, shiney shiney bit o' fluff!! plz write more!! lol actual kissing would be nice though, hey!! Im sorry alright Im a sucker for the M/I romance stuff :P
2X2
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 00:11
Oh!!! Ho ho!!! That was so wonderfully clever.... Oh, Inara! You don't play a player indeed! I just LOVED how she turned his smug little revelation right back around on him... I could *see* that 'Whuh? That wasn't supposed to happen' moment so clearly, hee hee!!!

Loved so many lines, like:

<i>Red-painted lips twisted up into a kind of disbelieving smile that still managed to look innocent and he wondered what it was about him that walked into these traps. There were normal women in this 'verse. On his ship, even. And here he was, actively being made befuddled.</i>

Sooo wonderfully Mal...

Happy sigh....
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 00:14
Perfect voice, timing, interaction. The only thing that I really like about this ship is the games they play with each other. This is an oh so very good beginning to what I hope are many more tease fests. Excellent!!! It was hilariously written as well, hot and bothered comedy gold.
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 03:46
Weeeeee! Nothing like commenting on the same awesome story in two places! Love, love, love!

Red-painted lips twisted up into a kind of disbelieving smile that still managed to look innocent and he wondered what it was about him that walked into these traps.

A good question indeed. Wonderful drabble!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 04:09
LMFAO!

Whoo! Those are some good wiles that Nara used on him...

haha

i loved this, great work!

syzg
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 04:55
holy moley, i break my noncommentating days to say WOOT!

super shiny, mate.
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 10:43
Well, this is a nice role-reversal of "Our Mrs. Reynolds," and it's only fitting that it should come at the end of "Trash." Poor Mal. You know, if Saffron was ever to be serious about Mal, between her and Inara, I'm sure he'd just about swear off women with all the wiles he'd be caught in.

Very cool story. Gave me something to smile about before going to sleep.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 17:27
LMAO!! This was great! Love how Inara turned it back on him...such a tease!

~K
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 19:53
FillionFlan here, sorry, I must not be logged in, but that was FANTASTIC. I can totally see that scene...great dialogue! And exactly as I think it would've played out. Thanks for sharing!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 March 2006 03:25
That was adorable, and made me very happy. Thank you!
MCK
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 19:42
You know that Inara would do just that. She has an evil streak we just don't get to see enough of. I bet Joss would have had alot of fun exploring that element in her nature so we will just have to do it for him. Nothing like beating (no, slaughtering really) a man at his own game. Mal should know better by now.
Sunday, 28 May 2006 16:43
"Gorram. Wiles."
yes...wiles *cough cough*

b
Tuesday, 14 November 2006 14:56
That was brillant Inara using her wiles on Mal i could really see this happening on screen

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