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Good Answer - Chapter One

Monday, March 20, 2006

Post-Serenity, Mal/Inara.

Inara can't think straight - she wants to know why Mal didn't ask to her stay, and if he will stop her from leaving this time around.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2439    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Good answer? That was it? THAT WAS IT? Way to open up, Mal. Inara punched her pillow, stretched her legs out, flipped over. Good answer?

Good what? Her eyelids popped open. Answer?

She sat up, her feet fit the floor. Her chest heaved, she clenched her fists. She wanted an honest response from Mal and she wanted it right now. Why didn’t he ask me to stay? Why did he let me go? Why did I leave?

Inara tied her dressing down shut with an angry yank and stormed down the passageway, but what she saw when she slammed into Mal's quarters stopped her cold. He lay stretched out on his stomach, covered from hips to mid-thigh in nothing but a thin white sheet.

Malcom Reynolds was the bane of her existence. He criticized her, demeaned her profession and her position in society. He made her forget her training; control wasn't something she had a great deal of when Mal made her angry. How could anyone love such a maddening man? Why did she?

Her anger dissipated at the sight of his large feet, which hung over the end of the too-small mattress. She approached his inert form, traced the arch of one bare foot with her fingertips, ran them lightly over his heel. Would her touch wake him?

“Mal.” She gently massaged his ankle. “Wake up. We need to talk.”

Mal groaned. His pillow muffled the sound of his sleepy, rumbling voice. "Do we have to discuss this now? Cause I am not wearing a stitch. Shy sure aint something folks know me for."

It’s funny, she thought. Even half asleep, he knows exactly what is on my mind. Inara kept her touch light, teasing. She was tired of fighting it, fighting him. Her fingernails scraped the hairy, rough skin of his calf, skimmed the back of his knee.

"I wanted you to ask me to stay. You didn’t. I'd like to know why." The sheet that rode his hips dipped dangerously low, but not quite low enough.

“Inara?” Suddenly, Mal didn’t sound sleepy in the least. “You’re touching me.”

“It’s about time, don’t you think?” Her fingertips skirted the inside of his thigh.

Comments
Monday, 20 March 2006 21:22
Yummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!




I'll be in my bunk.
Monday, 20 March 2006 21:22
Eeesh... will we ever know?

I loved Inara the beginning, with Inara punching her pillow. I know it was supposed to be angsty, but it also had a lovely sense of humor to it. In fact, this whole ficlet had humor to it, and I really enjoyed that.
Monday, 20 March 2006 21:26
Wow - lovin' the image of Mal with just the little sheet. I agree, Azhea, yum yum!

mphillips, where are you? Draw that!!!!!
Monday, 20 March 2006 21:40
Gods yes!!!! PLEASE draw that!!! It would become my new desktop!
BSW
Monday, 20 March 2006 21:41
I haven't posted here before - thanks for the warm welcome and the nice comments. I'll be updating this, so stay tuned!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 March 2006 21:48
Wow that was, just right. He wont share her. But I guess she might want to know if he would maybe think about sharing with her, not like her still companioning. But like himself, what he thinks about his goals his history, the things that haunt him and help him. Or maybe i am just crazy, but hell if i were asked to give up my life to take a new one i would want to know what it was. I would want to Share- but only with one person. ::shrugs:: i prolly crazed. -OS1987
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 01:59
Grrowwl! That was a perfect Mal.

I loved the Inara scene at the beginning, also. Very nice - I'd love to read more!
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 03:38
Oh my..

the lust, the heat...whew *fans*

without having any actual heavy duty sex in this, this story was hot just because of the emotion and sexual charging you stuck behind it....

wowsa, fantastic.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 03:50
BSW, that is one hot, wonderful fic. can't wait until you update it. Definitely want to see where you take this
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 05:39
ok that was hot. also intriguing and perfectly in character. more? like soon???

~kaynara
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 07:10
SO very hot!! You must write more.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 14:38
HOT!! Please update!! Mmm Mal with nothin but a little sheet...

~K
MIRANDAISTHEKEY
Tuesday, 21 March 2006 20:53
i love it. i particularly like how you split it up, letting us hear it from both Inara's and Mal's perspective.

And you have to finish this story. I truly like the ending.

"I don't share, Inara." beautiful. poetic even. major kudos.
BSW
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 00:29
Thanks for the wonderful compliments! I will update - can try to make it soon. Cheers! ~ BSW
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 March 2006 20:57
Excellent ficlet BSW! Thanks for the teaser on your blog. I agree with K, update soon please!

~M/A
Sunday, 28 May 2006 15:36
“Inara?” Suddenly, Mal didn’t sound sleepy in the least. “You’re touching me.”
mal's powers of perception do him credit

b
Monday, 29 January 2007 04:01
Wow! I mean WOW! I agree with Azhea, I'll be in my bunk lol
Monday, 03 August 2009 04:00
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't stop there, its brilliant and so them

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