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HEAVEN AND HELL: 7. "Tangled"

Wednesday, March 3, 2004

"Shepherd Book starts putting two and two together. Simon is surprised to find himself viewing the Captain in a different light. Meanwhile another agenda is unfolding."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5011    RATING: 8.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "TANGLED"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: RIVER/MAL.

RATING: NC-17

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "PHOENIX RISING"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Shepherd Book starts putting two and two

together. Simon is surprised to find himself viewing the

Captain in a different light. Meanwhile another agenda is

slowly unfolding."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"TANGLED"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

It was hard to keep it all inside. Contained and locked away. Safe. Feelings kept seeping through the iron grip of his will. It was all that had kept him alive through the War. Driven him forward when his muscles were too weak to propel his body. His fear too intense to get beyond the thunder and burn of the battlefield raging night and day around him. Too far behind to catch up. Praying he had not lost him. Hoping there would still be something worth fighting for when the smoke cleared and the blood was washed from his weary eyes.

Jeb Tanner was looking at him strangely but he ignored it. No time for concern. They were a small elite group. Had to be. Every name added was one more link in the chain that could be broken by Alliance spies. Had enough of that in the War, didn't need them dogging his footsteps in the bitter aftermath. Knew their only safety was in being spread out. So thin on the ground as to be almost invisible to them as sought them. Their own would not look. Would know better. Any rutting fool that tried therefore came from the other side. He and his would send them back a piece at a time for their trouble. Seemed like the thing to do. But now. This news had stopped him in his tracks. Heart thudding with an

Comments
Wednesday, 03 March 2004 22:34
As always, Alison, it ends too soon. Yet there's always tons of plot and mountains of emotion. By way of thanks I'll just say that I hope that River/Mal is written from experience.
Thursday, 04 March 2004 20:51
You always deliver such an involving spin on the 'Verse

A joy to read as ever
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 05 March 2004 09:15
I'm fast running out of ways to say how much I enjoy your writing. Thrilling - in more ways that one! ;)

Poor Simon. Poor River. Poor, poor Mal. I'm dreading the ending....

Kispexi2 (why does the system keep pretending it doesn't know me?)
Thursday, 11 March 2004 14:56
Thanks for the kind comments folks, much appreciated. It will be a few days before the next part is ready as sadly my dear dad died and I have just got back from the funeral. As to why the system won't recognise you Kispexi2 this happens every so often to me as well, you have to login again. Just keep an eye when you first come on to see if you are addressed by your name or as anonymous, if the latter then log on and your name will come up. Hugs now, keep flying Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 10 June 2004 18:28
I liked this, but please look up the difference between 'prostrate' and 'prostate'.
Saturday, 12 June 2004 11:42
Quick comment to 'annonymous'. Thanks for picking up the typing error, this has now been corrected. I don't need a dictionary just a gorram keyboard that will let me type faster without loss of accuracy. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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