Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Skeletons - Part II

Friday, March 10, 2006

Jayne's got more problems from his past than just a daughter. Kaylee and River are fixing the ship, and River's confused feelings for Gabriel begin to wreak havoc on her emotions.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1987    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Yep,” Kaylee surmised, leaning away from the panel. She and River, standing outside at the rear of Serenity, exchanged knowing looks. “We’ll definitely need to take down the backfeed duct; I can’t bang it back into shape while it’s still connected.” She pushed her head back into the cavity that the removal of that particular panel exposed. “Give me... the three-inch drive.” River located the requested tool from one of the nearby tool bags and placed it in Kaylee’s outstretched hand. As soon as she felt the drive press against her palm, she pulled it in front of her, her eyes never leaving the deformed backfeed duct.

“We’ll need more light in here, too, and the rest of the panels gotta go so we can drop the duct.” She pulled her head out and, planting her hands on her hips, faced River. She thought for a moment, her eyes darting back and forth across the ground, then she took a breath and made eye contact with the girl.

“Vibe laser for the sealant, two speed handles, magnetic apex,” She listed. “Panels come off, we use the three-inch on the duct mounts, and down she goes.” She paused for another moment, surmising the situation. “We’ll probably need a third person; the duct’s pretty heavy, and we’ll be working five feet off the ground. I prob’ly shouldn’t’ve sent Simon away so quick...”

They spent the next thirty minutes unpaneling the rear section of Serenity and removing the mounting bolts from the duct ends. Finding a firm grip on her end of the duct, Kaylee observed, “Should be able to get ‘er down by ourselves, just let me move...” She trailed off as the heavy duct began to move, and at first, Kaylee thought that it might be slipping, but then she realized that the duct was moving out, not down.

Kaylee and River let go of the duct as Gabriel lifted it to head-level, turned, squatted, and set the duct on the ground, off to the side and out of the way. He straightened as Kaylee and River hopped down.

“Thanks,” Kaylee told him, smiling and trying not to act surprised. “Sorry, I didn’t see you there.”

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 11 March 2006 03:46
Wow! You've certainly caught my interest! Keep it comin'.
Saturday, 11 March 2006 12:36
More please..I'm enjoying this.
Saturday, 11 March 2006 19:50
Great stuff! You need a page break or something when you change scenes.
Sunday, 12 March 2006 21:18
I actually laughed out loud picturing the 'Shiny. I knew I got out of bed this morning for a reason' line!

This was great but I'm requesting asterix breaks between scenes... please!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 10 April 2006 14:40
I like the asterix idea. Necro.

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