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HEAVEN AND HELL: 6. "Phoenix Rising"

Sunday, February 29, 2004

"The job on Rainbow goes well. Zoe cannot shake off the feeling that this is all wrong. Jayne keeps watch while the connection between River and the Captain deepens."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4898    RATING: 8.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "PHOENIX RISING"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: RIVER/MAL.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "ASHES"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "The job on Rainbow goes well. Zoe cannot shake off the feeling that this is all wrong. Jayne keeps watch while the connection between River and the Captain deepens."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly' are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"PHOENIX RISING"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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There really was pretty much nothing of worth left standing on Hera. Didn't stop them coming though. More it seemed with each passing year. Singly or in groups made no difference. A patchwork of folk drawn from all corners of the 'verse that was. Some with anxious eyes skipping from nondescript view to empty war ravaged plains. Winds whipped unbroken across a land that was suffering still. Her few trees uprooted or burned down. Her peaceful valleys like a landfill where the bodies of the dead lay unblessed and un-numbered. The crude earth heaped over shattered bone and ripped flesh like some grainy blanket blocking out the view of Hell while Heaven looked down and lifted not one finger nor shed one tear of remorse. The impalacable eye of God a thing beyond mortal understanding. Or so it seemed to them as were left. Those with a burden to carry that could never be laid to rest.

Tyrone Garvin clamped his teeth tight together. So hard it would have made his jaw ache had he been in a mind to be thinking on it. His thoughts were as blurry as his eyes, wrapped in memories that hurt him more than gorram shrapnel. Heart all contracted and painful. Not so much with memories of the past but the future unfurling uncertainly before them like a flag th

Comments
Sunday, 29 February 2004 21:40
This can go in so many directions...on the edge of my seat, biting nails furiously !!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 01 March 2004 19:35
Exactly how old is River? Because if she is as young as I think she is then this is disgusting. If not, then this is a good story. Either way, good writing.
Monday, 01 March 2004 19:43
Hurrah - Zoe looks to be accepting. The new team can't be anything short of invincible. Or, do you have something planned... Write more soon!
Tuesday, 02 March 2004 05:36
Reflecting on the shiny story late tonight... All curious now how, if River has the power to bequeth telepathy on her lover, how come she lacks the power to discern Inara's and Book's intentions? More mystery!
Tuesday, 02 March 2004 09:58
artships, there is a reason for that. Keep playing close attention to everything that happens from here on. As for anonymous not knowing what age River is you should recall from the first story in the series that she is '18'. Remember the great pains she went to in order to make sure her brother and the rest of the crew know that she was not being manipulated by the Captain but had 'chosen' him for herself. She wanted them to know, and Simon in particular, that she was now an adult and able to chose who she loved for herself. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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