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Serenity's Story- Part 6

Friday, March 3, 2006

A story with the perspective of the 10th character, Serenity.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2921    RATING: 10.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Here, is Part 6. Sorry it took a bit 'a time to post. I like to let stuff simmer before I post it. Make sure nothin' needs changin'.

Here are links to the past ones, if you haven't read them:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=7736#0”>Part 1, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=7755”>Part 2, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=7780”>Part 3, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=7826&nid=11359”>Part 4, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=8045”>Part 5

*Joss is the greatest. I just borrow his awesomeness of Serenity/Firefly.

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Serenity never much liked landing’, but this particular planet made her more ‘n a little nervous. She knew it would only be a few hours; Mal and Zoë had gone to drop off some cargo. And probably pick up some more. She had kept telling herself that they‘d be back soon and he’d get her off ’a this poor excuse for a planet.

Finally, Serenity saw some movement. She hoped it was Mal and Zoë, otherwise there was going to be trouble. Wash and Kaylee were making some routine checks and wouldn’t really stand much of a chance. Luckily, she made out their figures in the back of a hover craft. When the craft got there, Mal shook the driver’s hand.

“Thanks for the lift, Baker. I imagine these containers being a mite troublesome without some manner ‘a transportation.”

“Not a problem, least I could do.”

Zoë began to pull down the first container. Baker gave her an interesting look which Zoë returned by grabbing another container in her second hand. Mal grabbed the last one and smiled at Baker, who nodded at him and climbed into the craft. It’s engine slowly faded into the distance.

“I’ll get these stowed away, sir.” Zoë pulled up the grating on the left side of the cargo bay.

“Ok, I’ll tell Wash to get ‘er started, you sure you don’t wanna tell him?”

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Friday, 03 March 2006 05:54
I think I'm the first...shiny. I just got caught up with all of the chapters and have to say that quality of the writing started out great and has steadily been improving. I hope you get down River's relationship with Serenity. Post soon, post often.
Saturday, 15 April 2006 16:30
yay!!! it's good to know serenity cares about our heroes as much as we do. also good to know there's some jayne about the place *wink*

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