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HEAVEN AND HELL: 4. "Mixed Signals"

Sunday, February 22, 2004

"Zoe is convinced Mal is making a big mistake. Inara and Shepherd Book make a discovery. So does Simon."

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TITLE: "MIXED SIGNALS"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: RIVER/MAL.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "A DIFFERENT EDEN"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Zoe is convinced Mal is making a big mistake. Inara and Shepherd Book make a discovery. So does Simon."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"MIXED SIGNALS"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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It seemed such a tiny concession that the Captain was baffled by the vehemence of Zoe's opposition. The more intransigent she became the angrier he got. They left Pepper Rawlings sitting in front of the saloon while they went somewhere less public to discuss the job. Mal was beginning to get the uncomfortable feeling they were talking about something else. He just wasn't sure what. "It's too risky, sir."

"Zoe, ain't no risk involved. Both Lauren and Rainbow are peaceable worlds. Ain't no one pushin' or shovin' us, no treadin' on toes or such, so why the hedgin'? What's really on your mind? An' don't tell me it's this job, *dong ma*?"

She tried not to glare at him but failed. As the silence between them deepened he sighed. Zoe had no easy way of saying what she felt needed saying. "Ain't right, sir."

"We already had this discussion."

"I mean you and River."

His look hardened and a stab of pain flickered briefly in his eyes. "Not your call, Zoe."

"You're making a big mistake, Mal."

He was all kinds of mad with her now but was determined to try and hold his temper. Zoe was his oldest friend. Trusted her more than he trusted his own self most of the time but a line had been drawn and it was all kinds of unamusing how much she was crossing it. "If it's a mistake it's *my

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 22 February 2004 23:41
I'm dying, here...Been checking everyday for a new posting...Inara BAD?? Who's 'the other' ?? What in the diyu is going on ??
I've been re-reading all your other fics and finally saw the set up for Mal and River's connection...Good stuff, all of it...except maybe The Silent Hours ;-)
Just creepy
Monday, 23 February 2004 17:13
Oh No! Inara and the Shepherd are really baddies?? This is terrible! (hence the 7) But still I can't stop reading it!

Hope you post the next installment soon Alison, the wait between last time and this time seemed endless!

Keep up the great work, and thank you as always.
Hazel
Monday, 23 February 2004 18:26
I've always been a bit peeved at Inara for keeping herself from Mal, so to find out she's an enemy agent is not so bad. I expected better of Book, though. Still do. Mostly, of course, I can hardly wait to see what happens next.

Hope your father's doing better, too.
Monday, 23 February 2004 23:13
I like it. Dark conspiracies are great

Tuesday, 24 February 2004 12:31
You never let us down, Ali. Another brilliant chapter. Love the Zoe/Mal and Jayne/Mal dynamics. Chilled to the bone by Inara. Slightly iffy about Book.
Thursday, 26 February 2004 23:58
Thanks for all the kind comments. As for dad he is still very poorly but a little more stable. They hope to wean him off the oxygen and give him a 50-50 chance of survival. The next part of this story will be up in a couple of days, thanks for being patient. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 16:00
Okay, I get the whole Inara/Book thing, but what the heck is the ring for?

I hate when people use Mal's feelings about the war against him.

I feel real sorry for Zoe because she is throwing a cog in the workin's of her relationship with Mal. Doesn't she see that he let her have her life and she should let him have his?

Great I wish I could read more today...sigh..RL sucks.

SID
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 March 2006 00:00
holy crap okay Inara . . . its good that she is not with mal and river is but, she's not horrible she could end up with Jayne, but in this story she's a bitch. woman has a lot to learn, messing with my mal damn i'd kick her ass and the shepard too. Keep it up this suspense is killing me

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