Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Settling

Saturday, February 25, 2006

Should he stay or should he go? For Mal, it's a decision he can't make for himself.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1789    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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"Well, ma'am, looks like everyone's done. We'll be happy to do the clean up. It's the least we do in repayment for that wonderful breakfast."

"What the...? We'll do what?"

"Thank you so much, preacher. And glad see you're so happy to chip in, Jayne. Zoë? Can you handle this bunch or are you gonna need my help?"

"We'll be fine. Thanks Lily. For everything," Giving the older woman a quick hug and kiss on the cheek, Zoe headed off the back porch into the house. Stopping suddenly, she realized she forgot something. Spinning on her heel, she said, "After we're done, the rest of us'll be heading back. That okay with you?"

"Ain't much trouble in the least. And make sure y'all don't break them plates. That's my good china...oh no you don't, boy. They can handle themselves. 'Sides, got a job for you shelling these peas," Lily said, putting the wooden bowl of peas in Mal's hands as she took some more empty bowls off the counter. Grabbing him by the arm and leading him out the back door off the porch, she steered him towards the small garden, taking a seat on the wooden bench. Mal immediately sat down next to her, bowl of peas between them, putting one of the empty bowls on the ground between his feet. He started peeling away, leaving the green skins and chucking the peas in the empty bowl, Lily following suit.

It was nice outside. He loved snow sun; the cool, crisp, clear light reflected by the tiny ice crystals of the snow that seemed to dance in all places at once, lighting up the surface of everything. It always proved one of the shiniest pleasures for him as long as he could recall. But the real joy of snow sun was the fact that it didn't burn you, turning you all red and peely. It didn't cause you squint as sweat trickled into your eyes while you baled the hay or herded the cows into the corral or chased after the chickens who decided that 2 minutes before supper would be the best time to get into her carrot and potato patch. Yeah, it wasn't that warm, but you got same effects without the hindrances.

Comments
Saturday, 25 February 2006 04:53
Awww.

*melts*

*sniffs*

Crew. Love.

MAL LOVE.

Really lovely piece - had me scratching my head at the beginning, but it was a great ending. Mal's ma was perfect.

Loved all the voices at the end - you could tell exactly who was saying what. Thank you.
Saturday, 25 February 2006 05:24
Very well done. Took me a minute to figure this one out but a big clue was the detail about ranch hands. You thought of everything.
Saturday, 25 February 2006 07:42
Very nice.
I'd always gotten the (maybe mistaken...who know's when or if we'll ever meet Mal's mother) impression that she was no longer alive.
I'm at a loss for words having lost a parent...although it was 10 years ago..just touched me I'm sayin' is all.
Thanks.
Saturday, 25 February 2006 13:33
*tears up*
that was just so... umm that was so beautiful.
wow.
thank you.
Wednesday, 05 April 2006 15:09
how is it that mal is most lovable when he's been dying? not that i prefer him corpsified or anything...

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