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Pride Goeth Before You Fall - Part 6 (of 6)

Friday, February 24, 2006

Post-BDM. It's easy to know when things aren't right, but a good deal more difficult to swallow your pride and fix them. Mal/Kaylee.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2091    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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In the weeks that followed, Mal and Kaylee only shared company to give and receive progress reports on Serenity’s condition. They worked out an unspoken schedule of avoidance: when one arrived for a meal, the other left seconds before; when one tended to things in the cargo hold, the other was sure to be elsewhere. None of this went unnoticed by the rest of the crew. No one could work a smile out of Kaylee, and if Mal tried to bite one of their heads off one more time…well, Zoe and Jayne had a plan worked out that involved some time in forced solitary confinement.

A few hours after picking up cargo for a transport job to Santo, Zoe found Mal in the hold inspecting the contents of the crates. She leaned against the stairway railing and silently waited for him to finish. After a few moments, Mal straightened and called behind him, “You got something that needs sayin’?”

“What makes you say that, sir?” Zoe maintained an expert air of innocence. It always annoyed Mal; she was even better at hiding her emotions than he was.

“Never fix me with that stare of yours ‘less you’ve got something to say to me. Usually means I ain’t gonna like it, neither.” Mal knew she was baiting him. Since he was rather busy making sure things were in order for the drop, he took the bait willingly.

“Probably won’t. Came to tell you that you’re an idiot,” Zoe said.

“You know, you’re the second person to tell me that in less than a month and I’m starting to get a mite offended by it.” Mal replaced the lid of the crate he was examining with a thud and turned to face her.

“Think we don’t notice how you and Kaylee have been avoiding each other? That girl hasn’t smiled in weeks. Don’t know exactly why but I surely know it was your fault.” Zoe’s emotionless expression never wavered. It made arguing with her extremely irritating.

“It was not! You can’t go around accusing me of things you don’t know nothing about.” He tried his best anyway.

“Know that she tried to work things out first and had it all go wrong. She ain’t gon

Comments
Friday, 24 February 2006 19:20
I LOVED IT!!!! Please do another Mal/Kaylee story soon. You are so good at putting them together and making it believable.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 February 2006 23:14
I agree I would have never thought this pair could work until your series
PIXIE4MIRANDA
Saturday, 25 February 2006 03:25
I liked it like I liked Sabrina (and not the teenage witch), quite a lot



ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 February 2006 21:06
Wow excellent! I always thought Kaylee and Mal would be cute together, but never thought it could work. Please write more!!!
Monday, 27 February 2006 22:17
You are an excellent writer. This pairing does not sit well in my mind, but you wrote it beautifully. Usually I won't bother reading through a multiple part story if the pairing isn't one I like, but you captured my attention. Please keep writing!
Wednesday, 05 April 2006 15:00
“You just touched my rear, little Kaylee, and I do believe it was on purpose."
well, if you will wear such tight pants...

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