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One Further Addendum- part 2

Tuesday, February 21, 2006

Second installment on my Big-Damn-Inara Theory.
*warning:Exposition+++*

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One Further Addendum- part 2

-Your what now?

-You heard me.

“#Just when you think you know someone.#' Shaking his head, Mal is all sorts of confused, betrayed and plain pissed. 'I just think it's pretty weird that you've never mentioned having a daughter before-”

-Before what, Mal? Before we started going out? Before we became lovers? Or before we got married? Since when were you or anyone on this crew owed that part of my life?

Evidently, that was the wrong thing to say. Inara could sense Mal withdrawing again. He started typing coordinates for the training house and mumbled something about an ETA in 6 hours. This needs to be done carefully. She got up and approached his chair slowly, perched herself on a flat area of his control panel and waited for his attention. She made sure she was closer to the door than he was, ready to block any attempt at escape. Only in resignation did he turn his chair to face her. Knees just touching her own. ”You're right. I ain't your lover, boyfriend or husband. You don't owe me anything. I'm sure you have your reasons for keeping this to yourself.”

Inara reached out to take his hand. Pressed it briefly in gratitude.

-Was this what you meant by 'being good'?

-Precisely.

Inara made herself more comfortable on her seat. She would have to start at the beginning of a long story.

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Just before the Parliament declared war on the Independents, the Guild in Sihnon did a stupid thing. It allied itself outright with Parliament and ordered all companions to take Alliance officers and business partners as priority clients. Some houses went so far as to pair companions with certain military brass in order to retain some political clout when the war got underway. House Madrassa led in the matchmaking of course, much to the disgust of most of the companions there. We not only felt our basic right to practice freely undermined, but more importantly, we objected to being treated as whores by our own Guild.

Comments
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 11:23
*Wode ma*, those rutting Alliance scum. Poor Inara, but doesn't her first love sound a bit like a clone of Mal? Hmm, could we be seeing patterns repeating themselves? And how old it Dharma now? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
FUNKYINFISHNET
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 14:18
Touching and tragic, I feel so sorry for Inara. This is so interesting and readable. Keep it up :- )
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 15:51
Inara being a 3rd generation companion who never knew her parents is an interesting concept. As is the Guild contracting with the Alliance during the war. I'll be interested to see where this story goes.

"I love my captain."
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 15:51
Could have sworn I was signed in! That was me. *points up*
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 18:14
I don't normally bother with Inara-centric fics but you've got me hooked on this one.
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 19:25
Your politics for the Guild seem to fit so well in the 'verse. This is a very logical way for them to react to political uncertainty and threat of war. Impressive!
Wednesday, 22 February 2006 04:25
Good prose so far, missmadrassa, but one thing about your politics and Guild operations that kinda makes me pause.

You have Inara a junior priestess during the war, which supposed ran between 2505 and 2511 (if you work with the series start year of 2517 and suppoosed references to indicate time passage between Battle of Serenity Valley and the salvage job during pilot episode).

Now, if one uses Morena Baccarin's general age during the run of Firefly (23 if her IMDb bio's right) to be Inara's general age, our favourite Companion would have been between age 11-12 and age 17-18.

That means by canon logic of Companions starting their training at age 12 (from a deleted scene from the BDM), she would have been a might too young to be having kids (at least in a Core society) at the time the war was going on....

Now, don't think me harsh or anything. I really like this fic and what it's doing. I just find the variations to be a might distracting personally. You can take my thoughts with a grain of salt

BEB
Wednesday, 22 February 2006 08:25
I am kinda glad i was not the only one that thought inara would be to young... heh. kinda botherd me a bit but i just pretend she is older.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 February 2006 15:10
This is missmadrassa not logging on at work.

Sorry if I'm spooking people with the 'Inara was a child prostitute' suggestion, which by the way, wasn't my intention. I 'm having fun weirding people out.

But honestly, isn't it feasable at all that she could be a little bit older than 23? I like to think that she is around thirty and that her child is about 11-12 years old. She is in the business of being beautiful after all- can't she look slightly younger than her age?

People get away with slash fiction for God's sake...
Thursday, 23 February 2006 21:03
missmadrassa,

While I can't speak for OldSoul, I know I never meant to harmfully criticize your interpretation of Inara's life.

Until I saw Morena Baccarin's DOB, I thought she was a lot older than a mere 23 then and 27 now. Though scenes like her recovery from Saffron's Good Night Kiss in "Our Mrs. Reynolds" do show how young she looks when only in minimal or no makeup.

Maybe Inara is older than the actress who plays her in Joss's mind...which would give you the closer interpretation to canon than a schmuck like me who would play up that aspect in any fics with UST between Inara and Mal.

Keep up the excellent ficcing!

BEB
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 13 March 2006 00:52
MMmmmmm, funny... and I thought I was the only one who wouldda noticed the age problem there... Im not alone in paying way too much attetion to details where Firefly is conserned!! :) Anyway's still an amazing fic. keep it up! :
Saturday, 25 March 2006 15:14
ah, now if you were joss, you would completely evil and have mal be the guy who killed zach. but you're not that twisted. are you?

b

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