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The Newcomer - Part V

Sunday, February 19, 2006

The rest of the climax and beyond... includes an interesting Epilogue, where Mal, Gabriel, and Zoe face the biggest decision of their lives.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2160    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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*Out of bullets; time for phase two...*

Dropping her now-useless firearms, River Tam sprinted for the cover of a nearby building. *It’s okay; only six targets left...* Tearing around the building and racing down the next street, she circled the block, coming back behind the surviving mercenaries. They raised their weapons when they noticed her, but River was too fast. Disarming the first with a kick, she slammed his head into the nearby wall, then attacked the remaining five. She made quick work of them.

Standing alone now, chest heaving from the exertion, River was motionless for a moment. Finally, she turned and glanced toward the sky. Hanging from the belly of Serenity like a large, bearded spider, Jayne gave her a quick thumbs-up. Hesitating no longer, River returned her vision to the ground-level and headed back across the street toward the opposite side of the warehouse.

“Go ahead,” Mal urged, nodding toward the gun on the roof but not looking away from Niska. “This is your last chance to point a gun at me. Take it.”

His expression frozen in one of intense curiosity, Niska knelt and retrieved the weapon. Straightening, he flashed Mal an evil grin.

“My, Captain Reynolds, but you are an old-fashioned man.” He pointed the gun at Mal’s head. “In zis case, however, I do believe it will be your last-”

Malcolm Reynolds, former sergeant in the Independents army, veteran of the Battle of Serenity Valley, and captain of the Firefly-class starship Serenity, drew his pistol and fired a single bullet through Niska’s skull before the other man could even twitch his finger toward the trigger. He blinked once, and Niska’s now-lifeless body crumpled to the rooftop.

“The only ‘last’ about this day,” Mal muttered, “is us lookin’ over our shoulder for you.” Holstering his gun, he moved to retrieve the other from Niska’s motionless hand.

“We’ve got to get you to the infirmary as soon as possible,” Simon implored, injecting a coagulant agent into Gabriel’s arm. “You are in very bad shape.”

Leaning

Comments
Sunday, 19 February 2006 21:39
Ooh, I hope Mal isn't going to opt for another gorram war. And Gabriel asking River to marry him? Now *that's* worth celebrating. At least Niska won't be able to mess things up. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 20 February 2006 00:18
There has to be more :O Make more!! ;) Great story!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 February 2006 16:21
M O R E ! ! ! Pooka.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 February 2006 18:23
Love your writing! More please!
OUTOFTHEWORLD
Friday, 24 February 2006 01:01
very interesting, look forward to reading more
Sunday, 12 March 2006 20:34
Wow... good, believable and fast paced plot development. Although I would suggest at least a line of Asterix's to separate scenes. That last scene change in particular is a little bit jarring.

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