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HEAVEN AND HELL: 3. "A Different Eden"

Tuesday, February 10, 2004

"River and Mal get closer while others plot to part them."

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TITLE: "A DIFFERENT EDEN"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: RIVER/MAL.

RATING: NC-17.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "A SPECIAL HELL"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "River and Mal get closer while others plot to part them."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly' are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"A DIFFERENT EDEN"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Her mind awoke seconds before her body. She loved this. Lying sated and content in the warmth of his arms, so happy just to be this close. He was still sleeping though he had woken once or twice in the night she had eased him back into a trouble free sleep that made her heart lighter than air. He was so gentle, his passion deep but not overpowering. A tenderness to him that strangers never saw and friends only rarely. Every journey into the heart of him was a voyage of discovery into herself. A smile graced River's lips before her eyes opened to gaze on the object of her affection. As if she was the alarm that woke him he stirred from his sleep and smiled back. "*Ni hao ma, bao bei*?"

"*Hen hao, ni ne?*"

"Like a baby."

That made her laugh quietly and her humour was another gift to him that he was so glad he had opened. He felt as if every moment spent with her was something so precious and wondrous he could not bear to squander it with anything less than happy thoughts. His smile widened as he realised he was delirious with joy. She knew, even if she could not see it in his face nor read it in his eyes it was in his heart. His mind. He really was hers and nothing in the 'verse could make her happier. Except the one tiny problem of his idea of being honorable and such like. At times the Captain had an almost archaic sense of ch

Comments
Tuesday, 10 February 2004 16:28
Another gripping installment Alison, thank you.

Once again the mannerisms, the speech, everything, is absolutely spot on. It is so easy to read the words yet see this in my mind's eye being played out by Nathan, Summer etc.

Just so I can pace myself, are we looking at a short series or a long series?
Tuesday, 10 February 2004 18:46
"Phoenix?" Ooo, a juicy mystery! I hope the conspirators turn out to be more misguided than evil, just so I can keep liking them, you know? And thank you for keeping Mal and the Tams doubt-free. You're so much better than the melodrama of lovers separated by misunderstandings.
Tuesday, 10 February 2004 20:38
Thank you for the kind comments. As for how long this story will be, that would be telling. I have the whole tale mapped out in my head but the telling of it covers the kind of canvas that can't be restricted to lines drawn on a page and measured. Just enjoy the journey and my heart will be glad. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 11 February 2004 10:38
Oooh! Hopping about with excitement. Want to say stuff about the plot, and earlier comments, but don't want to be spoilery. Not that I *know* ofcourse, but there are a lot of bells ringing in my head. Neat. If we can't have Whedon, let's be grateful we've got Ali.
Wednesday, 11 February 2004 13:46
Wow. Just wow.
Thursday, 19 February 2004 21:28
Alison!!

Where's the next installment??? It's been days and days and days... I need my Firefly fix!
:-))
Sunday, 22 February 2004 18:29
Apologies for the delay in getting the next part written but my father was rushed into hospital with a heart attack and there have been complications. We still don't know if he will pull through so there will be less puntual postings for the time being. I am hoping to have the next part up later tonight. Many thanks for your kindness and patience folks, Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 15:45
Another wonderful addition...ohhh! The plot thickens...So, Shepard is a serpent and Inara is a bitch...oh, wait we knew that already.

Can't wait to find out what the gorram heck is goin' on here.

Hopefully I get to read more!

SID

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