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The Newcomer - Part II

Monday, February 13, 2006

Second installment in my Gabriel tangent. I finally added some Chinese! We learn more about Gabriel, and he starts familiarizing himself with, and including himself in, the crews' lives. Dramatic interaction between Kaylee/Simon, Mal/Inara, and Mal/Gabriel

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“There hasn’t been a new warrant out in months,” Mal said to Zoe over his shoulder as he descended the steps and turned toward where the infirmary was located. “And we ain’t seen no indication that the gou tsao de project goonies are still tracking us. I’m all about bein’ cautious, but we can’t hide in the black forever, and our next job is on Persephone, which just happens to be closer to the Core than we’ve ventured in a spell.” He stopped outside the infirmary long enough to turn and look Zoe in the eyes. “I wager it’s worth the risk.”

“I ain’t disagreeing with you, Sir,” Zoe assured him. “I just felt it my duty to point out the facts.”

“And you’re well within your rights to do so.” With that, Mal entered the infirmary, where Simon was comparing diagnoses. “What d’ya know, Doc?”

Simon stopped scanning long enough to glance at the Captain. “Nothing useful yet, but I’ve gotten a lot of data. It seems that my new study has had extensive surgery throughout his entire body. There are hairline scars on every limb and organ, and numerous cuts were made all over both sides of his torso.” He wandered across the room as he spoke, the way he tended to do when giving the captain reports. “Additionally, although I’m sure they never tried anything with him the way they did River, he has definitely had at least one lobotomy. The purpose of that, however, I have yet to determine.”

“Mmm,” was Mal’s only response on that sentiment. “So, any idea what they did to him?”

“Some of it, yes. From a small biopsy I performed, I discovered that his muscle tissue is unlike anything that I would call typical of humans. The pattern of the strands is different, although I have no idea what kind of procedure could accomplish such a task, let alone the reasoning behind such a...” He trailed off at Mal’s bored look, and rephrased his explanation. “His muscles are weird. Does that help?”

“Keep it simple, and get the point across, Doc. Sie-sie, shr ah.”

“That’s not all that I found,” Simon continued. “Several of his organs have be

Comments
Monday, 13 February 2006 22:52
Just read the first part and whizzed through the second, this is good writing and a really interesting storyline. Write more quickly! :D
Monday, 13 February 2006 22:52
Oooops, trouble on the horizon in Paradise, methinks. I really feel drawn to Gabriel and just hope there is not too much darkness when they land on Persephone. Can't wait to see what happens next. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
TAMFAN
Monday, 13 February 2006 23:21
Uh-oh, trouble in paradise for Mal/Inara...

I'll admit when I first saw your summary that I took Gabriel to mean Simon and River's dad. Silly me...

You've set up an interesting plot. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

LONEWOLF7
Tuesday, 14 February 2006 04:37
yeah sorry, never even thought about the fact that Gabriel is the Tams' father. Guess there's two of 'em now!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 19:23
Gabriel is an interesting character.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 20 February 2006 15:42
Like it alot, write more. Pooka.
Sunday, 12 March 2006 20:26
Some good interaction here between the original crew and your new character. He's really starting to grow on me but then...I am a sucker for that whole tortured survivor thing!

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