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Aint Nothin' in the Verse (Part 3)

Sunday, February 12, 2006

Mal and Inara finally have the talk. Will he finally admit his feelings for her? Mal/Inara. Sexual content.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2574    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Aint Nothin' in the Verse (Part 3)

Author: InaraxSerra (a.k.a Lauren)

Rating: R/NC-17 for sexual situations

Summary: Mal and Inara have a talk. Will Mal finally admit his feelings?

Disclaimer: "Serenity", "Firefly", and all of the characters do not belong to me.

A/N: Everyone who reviewed, thank you! Reviews are what keep me going! So keep on reviewing and I'll keep on writing!

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Inara moved gracefully across the shuttle, trying to act as nonchalant as possible. On the outside she looked as calm and collected as ever, which was the complete opposite of how she felt on the inside. Inara pressed a hand to her abdomen, trying to ease her nerves a bit. She did not know why she was reacting this way, but the tone in Mal's voice told her that what he had to say was something of importance. She carefully took a seat on the couch, looking up at Mal. "Well, what did you need to speak with me about?" She asked him, trying to keep her voice as steady as possible even with her heart thumping so loud in her chest she was sure he could hear it.

"W-well.." He stammered, deciding to take a seat as well. "First off..I never told you that..I really am happy you're decidin' to stay here on Serenity. I..missed having you around, Inara." It was then that a genuine smile spread across Inara's face, and Mal was once again struck by her beauty.

"Thank you Mal...really. It means a lot, and I must say that I missed you too. I did miss Serenity, and the rest of the crew, but I missed you, Mal." She glanced down at her hands nervously, unsure of whether she should continue or not. She started a bit when she saw one of Mal's hands slide over her own. It was calloused and rough, evidence of years of hard labor, and yet it felt like heaven against her soft skin. Inara finally forced her eyes up to meet his, and she was taken aback by what she saw there. She had never seen Mal so vulnerable, his eyes were clear, expressing such emotion. He cleared his throat, as if it would make the words any easier to form,

Comments
Sunday, 12 February 2006 23:28
Loved it! I've read all the parts and you write the Mal/Inara dialogue beautifully.There can never be too much written about this couple, so I look forward to more.
Sunday, 12 February 2006 23:29
Loved it! I've read all the parts and you write the Mal/Inara dialogue beautifully.There can never be too much written about this couple, so I look forward to more.
Monday, 13 February 2006 00:36
Brillo pads! I **adored** this, been waiting so long for those two to finally admit their feelings and do something about it. Just lovely! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 13 February 2006 00:42
This was beautiful. You write both characters so well.

"Propping himself up on his elbows, Mal studied her, brushing a damp curl off of her forehead. "Well..I'd say that talk went fairly well." He joked. She laughed, and he smiled at the sound."

This scene made me tear up. It's soooo something that could have happened in the show, and it touched my heart.

More soon please?? :)
Monday, 13 February 2006 02:57
aww. so cute, and very well done

kudos!
INARAXSERRA
Monday, 13 February 2006 04:05
Thank you guys SO much, really. I always have trouble continuing a fic, but with this one I am trying to write with every spare moment I have! Really, the reviews mean a lot to me.
Monday, 13 February 2006 08:36
two words: thank you
Friday, 23 June 2006 21:00
shiny shiny shiny. I believe old souls two words were perfect for this chap.
Tuesday, 28 November 2006 05:27
Ahhhh the happy ending. Thank you so much I enjoyed all three chapters. I get so tired of reading angsty(sp?) M/I stories that, it's nice to ready a happy one.

You did a great job. I hope you keep on writing.
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 21:51
I loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Monday, 16 July 2007 01:08
wow these are pretty good sadly enough i dont got the gif to write my own but maybe be one day lol i am waiting the rest
Saturday, 22 December 2007 20:13
absolutely perfect... I was wondering how long it would take them

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