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Voyage of Serenity - Intro

Saturday, January 21, 2006

Post BDM. The crew has a new member and a new surprise waiting for them on the planet of Medway.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1399    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Voyage of Serenity - Intro

Author: Chris Dupre aka UntrainedApe

Disclaimer: Firefly characters belong to Joss.

Notes: suggestions and comments welcome. Chinese speech from characters is denoted with <>

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EXT. TENT CITY - NIGHT

The tent city of the nomads of Medway seems to stretch on forever. The tents are strung with multicolored lights and ribbons that give the city a festive, almost holiday sort of feel.

EXT. TENT CITY - OPEN AIR MARKET

Spencer Frye is in the center of the frame. He is an rather tall young man, sharply dressed in a suit that seems a little too small for him. There is a book in his hands that he has grabbed out of a flea market style bin. We can't see the cover, only the sinopsis written on the back. He is staring at it with a mix of shock and childlike awe.

SPENCER Zoe, get over here! You've got to come see this!

Zoe steps into the frame behind him, wearing a full length Muslim chador. Only her eyes are exposed. She lifts a hand out of the garment and slaps Spencer on the back of the head.

ZOE My name is Niri, Mr. Shabbaz Sheik Mohammed. Is it possible to go anywhere without you threatening to blow our cover?

SPENCER Whatever. Look.

He holds the book up to her face. Her eyes go wide.

ZOE Oh god in heaven...

SPENCER Allah.

ZOE Is that supposed to be who I think it's supposed to be?

SPENCER No doubt.

ZOE A bit exaggerated, to say the least.

Inara and River appear in the frame opposite Zoe. Both are wearing similar chadors.

INARA Dear husband, Alisha and I have gathered the provisions we will need for -

RIVER It is not a very good likeness.

River presses her hand to the cover.

RIVER They are all flat, no volume.

Spencer raises the book up over his head.

SPENCER Shopkeeper! How much for one of these?!

INT. SERENITY - CARGO BAY

The cargo bay door is open. Mal and Jayne are sitting on a stack of crates, looking bored.

JAYNE Explain to me why the kid gets to play the part of the honora

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 13:50
You had me gasping with the giggles!! Each character's reaction was perfectly in character and perfectly hilarious.

This is original and it's scary how plausible you made it, too. Bwaha!


I like Spencer. A new crewmember is difficult to pull of well, but he's present and witty without being TOO present or witty. I'm looking forward to seeing more of him. And of this adventure. :)
Saturday, 21 January 2006 14:33
ooooo now i want to know whats on page 67?!?! damn! you are so great! please post more! LOL Shoot i cant quit laughing! lol LMAO
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 14:42
Nice description of the book cover. Good to see that Blue Sun has managed to amalgamate Mills & Boon at some stage, and their quality publishing continues. I love Simon asking Inara for the reality check as well...gorgeous!

Keep it up.
Saturday, 21 January 2006 16:39
Very, very funny and I had to smile at Spence being all upset that he wasn't in the book. It's not like he is crew. I wonder what page 67 said? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 22 January 2006 08:02
ok i am not sure if by saying this i show how cool your fanfic is of how creepy i am but here gose: its has been almost 24 hours since your last post and i have checked in twice today only cause i was not able to get to a computer pfften enough to check it 'just ONE more time'. and i am still waiting. this was just plain fun and has potensial, please write more i am hooked! ... oh and in the the diyu is on page 67, and why were inara and mal seeming to be the most affected by it. i smell shippyness and on top of that i am out of my gorram mind with curiosity PLEASE POST MORE!

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