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GENIUS SERIES: 8. "Flesh and Blood"

Friday, January 20, 2006

"With Serenity's crew reunited there is the dilemna over what to do about the Tams."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4476    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "FLESH AND BLOOD"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "HOMING INSTINCT"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "With Serenity's crew reunited there is the

dilemna over what to do about the Tams."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"FLESH AND BLOOD"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Waking was all manner of crazy. Not only was the pain running rings around his memory and comprehension it was fragmenting what little grasp he had on the Here and Now. Faces kept looming into focus then out again, the yawing motion making him vaguely sea sick if such a thing was possible in the Black. At least that was where he assumed he was, the familiar thrum of Serenity's engines as distinct as his own gorram heartbeat.

Simon hovered but the Captain did not snap or call him on it, too swiftly losing consciousness again for temper to assert its' impatient and irrational head. It seemed everybody in the 'verse was crammed into the infirmary but the Captain had been wrong in one respect. Serenity was not in the Black, she was landlocked. Kaylee had the engine running ready for Wash to get them out of this world the moment they could shake free of this latest complication, not giving a thought to the fact that they still had not managed to refuel. One catastrophe at a time was all either of them could handle.

"Why ain't he wakin' up?" Growled Jayne, his eyes angry and suspicious as they flicked from the unconscious Captain to just inside the doorway where Gabriel Tam stood staring at them.

"Strictly speaking the Captain *was* awake..."

"Ain't talkin' about nearly, doc. Did

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 20 January 2006 00:57
Holy....OK, I didn't see that one coming. Well played!

And hurry up! I think we all need to hear this.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 20 January 2006 04:54
Gorrammit woman. More, and fast. The suspense is killing me!
Friday, 20 January 2006 09:32
Yay! Love this series! More soon would be good *nod nod* ;)
Friday, 20 January 2006 12:41
Wow. Great chapter. Poor Simon, the truth hurts, but maybe he's lucky afterall. More please?

"Our father's a petrie dish." I like this.
Friday, 20 January 2006 16:40
A twist and a cliffhanger.
Fantastic
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 08:30
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Pulling my hair out here. More please?
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 18:05
Most of this story is awesome, in the rest of the story, the writing and character voices are excellent. However, Gabriel Tam's voice needs some refining. He talks like a villain in a comic book, very dramatic and blustering, just in a very loud, grand way, making ridiculous demands. He's an abuser--abusers are usually also manipulators. Seems like an abuser would hide his true nature by trying to make it seem like he's the only sane one in the room. He ought to be a clever manipulator, good at making everybody want to forgive him and believe his promises that he's changed or that they deserved the abuse, etc. Gabriel doesn't do that-- his words just don't sound natural in the context of who he is and where he is, being confronted by the truth. He's not convincing as a character, frankly. Anyhow, thanks. Hope that helps in some way.
Friday, 04 November 2011 19:27
"You think that's bad," Simon quipped. "Our father's a petrie dish."
Ohmgeee poor Simon and River...
Thursday, 08 December 2011 15:23
A quick comment for the 'Anonymous' reader's criticism of the characterisation of Gabriel Tam in this story. Please read the whole story before assuming what is going on with him. Thank you to everyone for your kind comments, glad you are enjoying the ride. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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