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GENIUS SERIES: 5. "Not Asking"

Tuesday, January 10, 2006

"Simon and River lay low. Serenity's crew find themselves having to make a run for it while the Captain has to accept something he hates."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4418    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "NOT ASKING"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "THE HAND THAT FEEDS"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Simon and River lay low. Serenity's crew find

themselves having to make a run for it while the Captain has

to accept something he hates."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"NOT ASKING"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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It was the flowers that captivated her most. Their vibrant dancing colours making her feet tap eager to dance. Simon glanced at his sister and smiled, his look indulgent. River's mind was a jumble but the slow slide into madness had brakes on it now, the journey still moving through uncharted territory but no longer a head-long crash into insanity. Always supposing that the real world was sane.

"I knew you'd like it here, *mei mei*."

"The flowers." Her smile broadened. She spun herself round like cotton candy, her thin dress a whirl blending the colours of the fabric with the landscape. "They paint me 'til I'm dizzy, Simon."

An old women stepped out onto a sun drenched porch. Her weathered face turned towards them, her old rheumy eyes missing little. Where sight faltered instinct filled in the gaps. She knew they were in trouble. Hiding. But no clue in the 'verse to say from what and neither Simon nor River were talking. What they did say seemed like harmless gibberish. The woman thought River was touched, even felt a brush of sorrow for her. Sad that one so young could be so ruined. The work in progress spoilt before the greater work could begin. How fortunate that they had come here to Ruth Carlisle's homestead. Whatever t

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 03:22
This is amazing! Keep up the good work!
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 04:46
Great job. keep it up. I cant wait to read what happens next.
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 12:12
"Take no prisoners." Love the attitude.
Great story, I am so enjoying this.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 12:19
What's wrong with Simon! Ahh! This is excellent.
Thursday, 12 January 2006 05:54
Yo...
I am Hooked on this. You have captured my intrigue and heart with this. It's like reading the show's script. I am always impressed with your stuff. Keep up the good work.

-Roy Fokker-
Thursday, 12 January 2006 17:54
I commented anonymously on this twice now (before joining fff.net) and I just want to say that these are super fan fiction and what drew me to post mine! Thanks for the comments, they are really appreciated.
Thursday, 12 January 2006 17:58
Thankyou for the kindly words, and yes this is a superb fanfic site. So many wonderfully gifted writers, each with their own unique voices. And don't you love how active everyone is? I have been with some groups where weeks and sometimes months would pass before anyone wrote and posted a story! Thankfully that has never happened here and that is what keep us all flyin'. Hope to be reading a lot more of your stories in the future too. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 04 November 2011 17:59
"I'm all aware of that Shepherd. Just pray they ain't harmed the Cap'n."
Have I mentioned I freaking love Zoe? And that you write her PERFECTLY? XD GREAT JOB!!

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