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THE FORGOTTEN REALM: 28. "End Game"

Thursday, January 29, 2004

"The Captain wakes and finds out that Yen Mah and the Shepherd are no longer on the ship. The *laoban* takes Yen Mah's bait. River has one more secret to keep."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4513    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "END GAME"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: R.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "DREAMS OF HOME"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "The Captain wakes and finds out that Yen Mah

and the Shepherd are no longer on the ship. The *laoban*

takes Yen Mah's bait. River has one more secret to keep."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"END GAME"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

It was the weirdest thing but a good weird. Dr Simon Tam could not quite get over the way the crew had settled down as soon as the Captain had been found. It was as if they could not function properly without him. Awake or comatose he was the centre of their little 'verse. Not that the man in question had any idea. He was unconscious and it was a good thing too. He looked down at the Captain's pale face. Blood all cleaned off it, little cuts and wounds already treated and healing. But the echoes of deep trauma still visible even as he slept. Simon was keeping him heavily sedated for now. Wished he could find a facility to do a brain scan but did not dare suggest they go in search of one. Knowing the current disposition of the crew they were likely to think the Captain's life depended on it and head off to the nearest Alliance run facility with no thought of the danger to the rest of them. But that was not being fair, he conceded. As he worked he was silently counting in his head. When he got to a thousand the head peeked through the door. Right on time. He had to hide a smile. It was Kaylee.

"How's Cap'n doin'?"

"About the same as he was last time you looked in."

There was no smile, no light hearted banter back. Simon glanced up

Comments
Thursday, 29 January 2004 06:52
^_^ happy ending! I really like it... or is there more? Can't tell.
If it is the end, I want to thank you for a wonderful story. It always brought a smile to my face when I saw that you had posted another chapter.
I'll be sure to check out any new story you start. Keep flying!
Thursday, 29 January 2004 07:31
Thanks Squee, there is one last part to come. I appreciate every bit of feedback from all those who have troubled to comment. So happy you have enjoyed this outing. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 29 January 2004 11:43
Marvellous. That was SO good. I love the relationship between Mal and River and ""You were crazy before." She said with a hint of smugness." really made me smile. Beautiful! I'm so glad there's another chapter....And I really hope you've got plans for another story soon (although you must be about as spent as poor Mal by now!)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 29 January 2004 12:22
I am so thankful to you that you continue to bring my Firefly family to me and hope you never stop. I miss them so much and your stories help so much. I look forward every day to a new adventure. Please, keep writing and keep flyin'. Thank you.

BoazMom
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 29 January 2004 16:16
There were times I feared the story couldn't get here. You've made it all work out very satisfyingly. Thanks!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 29 January 2004 16:46
Nice piece of work. You have captured the subtle depth (not an oxymoron in this case) of the characters along with their conversational stylings. The plot was plausable and in my opinion true to the spirit of the characters. You obviously have a knack for this. Please keep writing. JH

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