Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

TEMPTATION SERIES: 48. "Pieces"

Thursday, January 5, 2006

"Getting back to Serenity is only half the battle. With the Captain in dire straits no one is prepared for further problems."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4292    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "PIECES"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "DISTRACTION"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY "Getting back to Serenity is only half the battle.

With the Captain in dire straights no one is prepared for

further problems."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"PIECES"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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It was pretty much crazy on board the Alliance Scout Ship Reknown. Simon Tam stared at the people lying tied up in various parts of the ship. He glanced at Zoe but met a cold blank stare. At times the woman could be truly frightening but he knew he was not the reason for the tension. As soon as he had set eyes on Captain Reynolds, Simon's breath had caught, worry making him oblivious to the press of people boarding the ship. Shepherd Book drew Zoe aside, worried that there would not be enough room for everyone and concerned about Jayne. No one had seen hide nor hair of him since locating the Captain.

Rafe Connor hugged his daughters, thankful to whatever God had spared them while grieving for the loss of his sons and so many good friends back on Glory. Chung-li made sure they were alright and spared a few words with Hilary Johnson and David Hall before going to check on Mal. Despite how crowded the ship was becoming, he knew none of them would feel happy leaving either of them on Hope after what they had been through. Plus they had been helping the Captain and for that act of compassion alone Serenity's crew would make sure they got safety away from Cyrus White's clutches. Zoe got Wash to help her deposit the crew of the Reknown outside. It was heavy work but at last

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 January 2006 01:48
Excellent. Progressing very well.

I'm late for a dinner date with a friend because of this chapter. Be proud, I hate being late.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 January 2006 04:06
Hurry up with the next one!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 January 2006 06:26
Wow, another excellent chapter. So many things happening at the same time, and yet still well-paced. Well done!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 07 January 2006 05:43
Wow. All I can say is wow.

So well written. You should be damn proud of yourself.
Thursday, 16 March 2006 17:11
OMG - such stress! Poor Simon, first Mal at death's door and then Kaylee going into labour.

Loved Mal's "Don't cry - that's an order" line. Very sweet. Very Mal.

Also much appreciated Jayne's rage - he kind of vented off some of mine.

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