Spoilers: Set post-Ariel
Warning: NOT fluffy
Whereat I turned me round, and saw before me
And underfoot a lake, that from the frost
The semblance had of glass, and not of water.
- "Inferno", Dante
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Cocytus
Jayne has finished dying.
There's still heat coming off his body, melting the snowflakes that land on his face, but soon enough he will freeze up like meat in the ice box.
A lump of white on the open plain.
They'll find him in a few weeks. Or maybe never.
River tugs the blanket more tightly around her shoulders and studies the pattern of blood in the snow. A dark hole of wet frozen soil, soaked with red. The color is hard to make out in the twilight.
Dusky white clouds reflect off the white landscape in a grey blue. Falling flakes cover up all signs of struggle.
There's a hush over everything.
Much better than before.
Sweat has dried on her forehead, under the cap. Beige is not a good color for her, but the season demands practicality.
The season demands pragmatism.
"Do you know what your sin is?"
She drags the knife through the snow, leaves trails of red, then she wipes it off on Jayne's sleeve. There's a shiver of wild-frantic panic running up her arm at the contact. A swirl of last thoughts. His Ma.
"I couldn't find a frozen lake," she informs him and starts walking back to the ship.
On the way she drops the knife.
The cap stays behind in a trash can six minutes from Serenity.
Her eyes are big and desperate when she stumbles into Simon's arms. She even cries a little.
"He wasn't anywhere."
The hot skin at his throat has her burrowing closer.
"Mei mei, you can't just run away," he soothes. "I was so worried."
No need to be worried any longer. River doesn't say it, because the Captain is close.
"Gorram it, I told him to hurry up with the whores." He stomps his cold feet on the ground and she watches the lumpy bits of snow falling off, mixing with the dirt.
-Kaynara
You can't take the sky from me
Rinny
Rinny -
I thought the setting post-Ariel would give it away. :) I've also sprinkled some admittedly very vague hints referring to Dante's "Inferno" and the ninth circle of hell, where all the traitors suffer in a frozen lake.
But mostly the post-Ariel thing.
Hmm.. maybe I should emphasize that more...
I liked it! Very dark, and I admit I read the comments before hand so I knew why she killed him already.
(And it wasn't too Sin City. There the blood rained everywhere and got on everything for no reason.)
I don't really see River being that spiteful, unless she was unaware of what she was doing. Maybe you could give a better idea of whether she was in her right mind or not?
Mostly this is an experimental AU, and I kind of liked the ambiguity of River's mental state. The creepiness hiding beneath the softer exterior, so I didn't want to look at her any more closely than I did.
Oh well. I'm glad you liked the references. :)
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