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S.T. Phone Home

Thursday, December 29, 2005

Basically Simon Phones home, River joins in the fun

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2081    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: *Ahem* “All of the characters, locations, objects etc. do not belong to me and never will, so all praise and so on should be directed at Joss and co.”

Translations-

Ai Ya – Damn

O, zhe zhen shi ge huai le de jin zha – Oh, This is a happy development

Spoilers-

Just say everything to be on the safe side

“And now for the feature presentation…”

S.T. Phone Home

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Simon walked down the street with his sister, she was getting distracted looking at things then asking what they are. To most of her questions he would ask Kaylee who was walking along beside him.

RIVER: “What’s this do” pointing to a contraption of some sort.

Simon as usual having no idea looked at Kaylee.

KAYLEE: “Its an Aft-Carborator for the Y-3600 class engine” With a “I know something Dr Tam doesn’t know” look on her face.

SIMON: “ERR, What she said” Looking back to River who wasn’t there. He looked back to Kaylee who also wasn’t there he looked around and tried to see past the people but the crowed just kept pushing him forward. In just a split moment he had lost both the girls in his life that he loved.

Simon woke with a jolt but he couldn’t sit up there was a weight on his chest, he figured that it must have been Kaylee which explained why he felt naked. He lay back to wait for sleep to take him again. He was almost asleep when he heard the clanking of an engine part immediately followed by an “Ai Ya” by Kaylee.

The fact that Kaylee was in the engine room and not in his bed didn’t dawn on simon until River kicked him when she rolled over. This bothered Simon a lot, not so much that his sister was in the bed with him (River often used to spend sleepless nights in her bigger brother’s bed). But what bothered him was that he could hear Kaylee heading away from the engine room, most probably to Simons room.

He tried shifting River off him. But River was wide awake and not showing it, she deliberately was making her brother panic.

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 29 December 2005 04:16
Not bad but you might want to try and be more descriptive with what people are doing and slow the pace down of the story.
Thursday, 29 December 2005 17:33
Very nice start though I have feeling Simon and River contacting their parents is not a good thing, even though they will try to make sure it cannot be traced. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 29 December 2005 19:05
Great start i hope you continue it. Really good job.
JOHNNYBROWNCOAT
Thursday, 29 December 2005 21:35
Excellent! Looking forward to the rest. 'Specially the fit Mal's gonna have when he finds out.
Thursday, 29 December 2005 22:22
I'm gonna continue it but I am going away for a few days so it wont be too soon, I'll have to make it up to you in quality.


Im glad that i've gotten so much support
-BR0WNC0AT












Wednesday, 04 January 2006 17:57
*laughs* nice title...

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