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THE FORGOTTEN REALM: 25. "Dawn"

Wednesday, January 21, 2004

All the threads of the tapestry are drawing together. With the Captain's life hanging in the balance secrets have a way of leaking out."

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TITLE: "DAWN"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: R for some torture sequences.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "THE DARKEST HOUR"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "All the threads of the tapestry are drawing

together. With the Captain's life hanging in the balance

secrets have a habit of leaking out."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"DAWN"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

"I don't understand how you know where to go!"

Everybody stared at Jubal Fox but River was ignoring him. Sheriff Bowman tried to sidetrack him, irritated by the man's poor sense of timing. "Does it matter how?"

Jubal spun round and gave him a really hostile look. "I've been patient with you Sheriff but I have to say I'm getting more than a mite suspicious with you and your little band of thieves."

The temperature on the bridge dropped suddenly way below freezing. Wash was following River's instructions to the letter, trying to hide his alarm at the rising tension behind him. Zoe turned to face the protagonists, determined that if it all went to *diyu* Wash would not get hurt. Everybody else could take their gorram chances. She had just about had enough of the snidey supercilious *justice department* man. In fact, she found it hard to believe that he was on the side of the law in the first place. As for that sidekick of his - Mickey Grey - he just looked and acted like a hired thug. Neither one of them sat well with her and she knew Jayne was fed up with the pair of them.

"I suggest you get off this bridge now." Said the Sheriff tightly. Deputy Andy Crowther was standing just outside the doorway, his body language tensing in case t

Comments
Wednesday, 21 January 2004 08:41
^_^ my name is Dawn... that was funny seeing it as the title.
Good stuff! this one seemed shorter than the others... or is that only cuz its a bit more lighthearted compared to them?
lovin' this fic!

When you can't run, you crawl, and when you can't crawl, you find someone to carry you.
Wednesday, 21 January 2004 18:12
As your name is Dawn I will gorram dedicate this chapter to you, *dong ma*? And no, it is no shorter than the others so it might be the lighter content it being largely minus the torture and such. Also we are approaching the end of the story. Take care and keep flying, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 21 January 2004 19:02
It's been a long, but satisfying, story, and looks to be ending satisfyingly, too. Well done!
Thursday, 22 January 2004 16:48
Just to show how much I'm loving this tale, I skipped to the comments to see if it's over yet. Because I was going to really draw it out if it was. But I see there's more...

So, will be eating my strawberry tomorrow.
Friday, 23 January 2004 11:54
Great opening! Love Zoe's glee at Jayne's intervention. Nice change of tone from the last couple of chapters and I love the sympathetic way you paint Jayne.

How much of a wuss am I to get tearful at "Dont' cling. Might hold on a time or two but I never cling"?

Oh, and how the pennies are beginning to drop. (I may be much dumber than Jayne!)

Another delicious strawberry, Ali. Thanks.

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