Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Poetry from a Master

Wednesday, February 5, 2003

This is not written by me, I am just posting it so that other people can enjoy this. There is one poem for each member of the cast, 10 in all. No I did not miscount. Any praise goes directly to Uncle Hyena

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Cap’n Reynolds

You can hear the Reaper whisper as you’re drilling through the black

Hauling widgets to the second moon of five,

And you know that he’ll be on you if you ever turn your back,

But for now you’ve never felt so much alive.

There is no home behind you; the Alliance saw to that,

And no safe refuge waits for you ahead—

Just an endless string of mudballs that the ‘formers have knocked flat

And a cold and lonely coffin when you’re dead.

But Serenity’s still flying, and that’s all that matters now,

And everything you care about is here;

Cause the people who aren’t with you just don’t matter, anyhow,

And stuff just finds a way to disappear.

Oh, it’s luck and guile and patience and no small amount of sweat—

Cause it’s sure not just the physics makes her fly.

.And one day you’ll die together, but it hasn’t happened yet,

And for now you own this little piece of sky.

Yes, it’s sweat and blood and courage and no small amount of love

That lets Serenity keep flying free.

So let the Reaper whisper, ‘cause when push comes to shove,

There’s simply no place else you’d rather be.

Paul Haynie

10/26/2002

Changeling

(for Jewel Staite)

While it’s true most of the Faerie Folk are children of the Green,

Don’t dare forget the Gremlin-kind, who follow Dame Machine.

They make their homes in crankcases, on circuit boards, and such,

And if you pay no mind to them, they won’t harass you, much.

Now, our Kaylee, she’s a changeling, with her roots in gremlin-kind;

She’s a more than passing-pretty girl, but she’s got a gremlin’s mind.

She says the engines talk to her, tell her what needs be done,

And that grueling annual overhaul is just her idea of fun.

She’s an innocent romantic when she deals with human kind,

But if you're wanting a mechanic, she’s the best you’ll ever find.

Mal Reynolds holds the papers, but she’s made his ship her own;

She's the Queen of all the Gremlins, and Serenity’s her throne.

Paul Haynie

January 15, 2003

Silver Lady

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Comments
Wednesday, 05 February 2003 19:16
I tried to edit it to say that Uncle Hyena's muse is being pouty, and won't help him out with the tribute to Book, but that didn't work out.

If anyone else wants to read his work, go to http://forums.prospero.com/foxfirefly/messages/?msg=6063.45
Thursday, 06 February 2003 03:26
Thanks to Loast Angel, though "Master" is a bit scary...

Once I get the "Book" poem done, I am going to send the whole cycle out to the actors. "Silver Lady" really should be dedicated to Joss; the "Simon" poem has since been retitled "Epiphany" and should have a dedication to Sean Maher, and the "Wash" poem has been retitled "Starchaser".

Sometime before the end of March there will be a website at http://www.malfet.com with all of this stuff (it goes nowhere at the moment).

It also interests me that after 50 plus readers, there are no ratings, and no comments. I'm here; go ahead and kick me if you want to.

Paul (Uncle Hyena) Haynie
Thursday, 06 February 2003 17:58
And here is the book poem, and I get to have some of what is laughingly called my life back.

Uncle Hyena

Enigma
(for Ron Glass)

“Why do smugglers need a chaplain?” the Alliance captain asked,
And he never got an adequate reply;
Because on a ship like this we all wear our intentions masked,
But we’re glad to have the Shepard share our sky.

He’s really very dapper for a man of modest means,
And his manners would do credit to a lord,
So it came as a surprise he was so good with the machines—
And with nearly every other job on board.

He’s been well educated; there’s no question on that score,
And his words of faith are nothing but sincere;
But he’s over-educated when it comes to crime and war,
And we have to wonder what he’s doing here.

He’s steady in a firefight, and useful in a brawl;
The sort of man you trust to watch your back.
It’s clear he knows that Law and Justice aren’t the same at all,
And he’s frightened by a cold death in the black.

“Why do smugglers need a chaplain?” We’ve all asked it once or twice,
During ship’s night when the lights have all gone dim,
And we’ve come to the conclusion, that for all his good advice,
He may need us as much as we need him.

Paul Haynie
February 6, 2003
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 09 February 2003 02:46
You are right sir, it is a puzzlement that so many have read, but none have commented. So I step out of lurk mode enought to tell you that while Silver Lady will go into my permanent poetry collection, all of your work captures a moment's glimpse of our favorite characters. I look forward to more!
Sunday, 09 February 2003 21:47
You occassionally lose the rhythm, but each of these seem to catch the soul of a character. 'Courtesan', for Inara, and 'Second', for Zoe, are my favorites, although both gave me chills.

Please write more.
Sunday, 09 February 2003 21:52
Moonglum is Elric's, isn't he? Michael Moorcock, from years ago...?
Tuesday, 11 February 2003 00:53
Lora:

Yes, Moonglum is from Elric.

Where have I "lost the rythm"? Give me locations, and I will fix it.

Uncle Hyena
Wednesday, 02 April 2003 00:51
To answer your question to another reader, I stumbled over this line:

And that grueling annual overhaul is just her idea of fun.

Also, I found myself skipping around a bit, because it was just too much poetry to take in in one sitting. Poetry is meant to be read in small sips--like good wine!

The one that really grabbed me was the ode to Zoe. The best way to appreciate a hero is to take a long look at his faithful companion!


Sunday, 06 April 2003 04:53
Gluehwurm:

You're right, that live is a bit sticky, but I think that it reads better aloud than silently.

At first glance it seems to have four doubled weak sylables, but the first one doesn't count, and neither "annual" nor "idea" is really a three syllable word, more like two and a half. So the only "real" doublet is on "and her".

So I'm still guilty, but as I said, it sounds fine when you read it aloud or sing it. (You can sing this to the verse, but not the chorus, of "California Girls", but be prepared for a giggling fit.)

I'm glad you liked "Second". Thanks for the kind words.

Uncle Hyena
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 22 May 2004 21:07
Brilliant! Thank you.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 26 April 2005 19:25
I loved them. I wasn't going to read all of them cus really you can't take too much poetry at once, but they were so beautiful. I have to agree with others - Second touched me, but so did the one about Wash, and Inara, and Kaylee. Thanks so much for sharing. Patti
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 11 August 2005 22:25
As always, Uncle Hyena, it's a pleasure reading your work.

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