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Christmas (Baby, Please Come Home)

Monday, December 5, 2005

First christmas post-BDM...and the womenfolk are sad

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First ever songfic so, please, be gentle!!!

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The characters are Joss Whedon’s, the lyrics are Darlene Love’s and the ideas are mine, but the money is not.

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The snow’s coming down

The Companion stood on the ramp, staring out at the world and watching the flakes fall to the ground.

I’m watching it fall

The snow spiralled madly, endlessly across the leaden sky like strands of DNA – each as precious and unique as the last.

Lots of people around

They scurried across the square, each safe within their own little insulated bubbles of happy existence.

She scanned the crowd for a flicker of brown coat and tried to remember why they were fighting this time.

And silently pleaded…

”Baby, please come home”

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The church bells in town

The mother slowly trudged towards the town church, her breath clouding in the crisp air.

All ringing in song

She remembered the way her little boy’s blue eyes used to light up at the clear, high sound and he would laugh.

What a happy sound

But he wasn’t here to listen to them now, he’d left her so long ago.

Marie Cobb looked up at the sky with damp eyes, as though hoping to see her son’s ship flying by.

And silently pleaded…

”Baby, please come home…”

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They’re singing “Deck the Halls”

The woman heard the carol singers outside and blocked them out automatically, as she did to so many things now.

But it’s not like Christmas at all

She felt no warmth or love from her husband as he touched her shoulder on his way to the door

’Cause I remember when you were here

Brushing her fingers over the glass of the window, she found the tiny heart etched into the corner of the pane and felt as though her own was breaking

And all the fun we had that year

And in the dark, Reagan Tam mourned for her children and the years gone by

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Pretty lights on the tree

The proud amazon stood at the helm, staring unblinkingly out at the towering fir tree that served as the town’s C

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 05 December 2005 19:52
very sweet and lovely,

syzg
Monday, 05 December 2005 20:19
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

I don't have words, just 'awwwwww'.
BEFFANNERS
Monday, 05 December 2005 20:29
Just lovely...
Monday, 05 December 2005 20:54
I love that the woman was Jayne's mother! Heart warming!:)
Monday, 05 December 2005 20:59
Meant his not the on the lost post, I think you get what I mean. Boys and their mom's are very cute!
Monday, 05 December 2005 21:10
That was truly beautiful. So creative, mixing the words of the song with each separate image, then resolving them all in turn. Well-written, very touching. Bravo. :)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 05 December 2005 21:18
klajsfljkahelkj awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 05 December 2005 21:40
I love it! Romantic and sweet. A pretty good use of song lyrics-- songfics usually kind of suck!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 05 December 2005 21:53
Awww. Very sweet.

ManicGiraffe (on a trip in Atlanta and pirating some dude's WiFi, so logging in is taking forever)
Monday, 05 December 2005 21:54
like the people before me... I only have this to say: awwwww
Monday, 05 December 2005 22:14
Oh wow this was beautiful and you wrote it with such a sure touch for the characters. Loved it to itty bitty little pieces - and then some. I also loved you likening the fall of snowflakes to DNA, each one unique. Sigh. Hope you write more stories soon. And Mal and Inara married? At last! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 05 December 2005 22:35
I really liked this one. It was heart achingly good.
Tuesday, 06 December 2005 12:40
Sad and beautiful with a hopeful ending. Lovely!
Sunday, 18 December 2005 20:18
very sweet and christmas-y

nice work, bellona!
Monday, 16 January 2006 18:56
stop damn well makin me cry!

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